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This looks promising.

Dear Mr B-25,
I normally don't favorite incomplete stories with only one chapter, as I have explained to you before. However, between the discussion we had about the sour lemon you were forced to write and the clear quality of your other works, in addition to the apparent direction of this piece, I have decided to forgo the wait for the second chapter, and am immediately putting this on my "favorite" and "tdf" shelves! Please Sir, I want some more.

Your humble watcher from the shadows,
Grungar von Drachen.

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Good to hear from you again, friend.

I so want to see how this continues, now :rainbowlaugh:

Eh, had to skip the entire chapter since I'm not into lesbian garbage so I have no idea how good the start is. So, did Rarity ever actually sit down with Spike and give an actual answer to his crush on her before she became a sleazy whore?

This is interesting to say the least. I honestly really hope we do get some answers to the situation of Spike and Rarity's relationship and where it is at the moment. I mean they seem so up in the air at the moment. I think also a HUGE thing we all most likely want to know is why or how she got into porn in the first place? And is she still doing it? I mean it is a VHS so I can only assume it is from a long time ago seeing how I can see them at LEAST having DVD by this point in time. I can see us getting answers to why she is showing up in the middle of the night at Spike's house since that is pretty random. And lets be honest she isn't like Pinkie or Dash she seem like the type to do that just to hang out. Hell Rarity seem like she wouldn't know how to hang out at all. Could you see her sitting around eating pizza and watching enjoyably bad movies? lol.

Hopes she enjoys getting creampied in the future chapters. Plus be sure to include pornographic words such as facials and creampies that would add more to the charm.

So, who’s the cover artist?

You know, if he really had watched that video a thousand times, it would have degraded into unwatchability. Also, you don't need a remote, the simple control functions have butttons on the frontof the machine. Failing that he could just pull the plug out of the wall. Just saying.

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you make fiction sad : (

Off to a good start.

So, Rarity is his best friend and longtime crush, but she's also a very renowned pornstar? Just how did these two meet? Do they engage in any normal social functions as friends? Does everyone tease Spike about his best friend being a porn star? If they met before Rarity became a pornstar, just what did Spike initially think of her career choice? Did he try to talk her out of it (before he started jerking to it, of course)? If they met after she was a pornstar...just how does one meet and become "besties" with a pornstar?

...No, seriously, how?

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Mate it's literally canon with the exception of 'Rarity made a porno one time' and 'Spike is older and has got his own place'. Not much else to it.

FUCKHIDEITSHERQUICKYOUSTILLHAVETIME!!!!!!!!!

The details of his apartment blurred into obscurity as he watched the camera pan in on Rarity, lounging on a sunbed, sand all around her.

I don't like sand.

But where's the spark?

Beep Boop 2nd chapter? ^^

Two months, no new chapter :(

Dang it! Canceled...

can we ask why it was canceled?

*casts revive*
This deserves an ending :p

Update, yay! Good job, please keep them coming!:moustache:

Huh? :rainbowhuh:

What's this then? I have no memory of this fic

Comment posted by SNES4ever deleted May 9th, 2020

OH GOOD this is back. I feared it lost forever. Glad to see it return!

Ooh thought this was dead. Glad it's not.

Why the freak out over the visit of a friend? It was just Rarity. A friend not seen for maybe a year.

At least not seen in person...

“Seeing as how my appearance is still enough to throw you through a loop? I feel right at home in calling you my Spikey-Wikey.”

:moustache:: "Thanks, I guess..."

“I must have been so incessant for it to feel like that. Good thing I finally backed off after a while.” He looked over to her as sadness tingled in his eyes. “Right?”
Rarity did not say the word back.

And we arrived at the next cliffhanger.
I expected this chapter would end with Rarity discovering his movie, but it seems that's for the next chapter.
Or the one after that... Or the one after that...

Nah, just messing with you.
Good chapter!
I'm curious to see where it goes next.

Dawwwwww how romantic and adorable~

I'd say go for the pron, my friend, this is what you're best at, writing the greatest stories. Unless you feel this is where it ends in a good note then I won't mind it none the less. Keep up the great work.

Go for the full ride! I mean the title is Banging a Pornstar. So might as well have Spike lay siege to that marehood and leave her so bowlegged that she can not even crawl afterwards. All those years of desire and teasing. Watching all of her films. Yeah he gonna deep six that pony plot.

I'm always a fan of more Sparity porn, if for no other reason than to get some full-circle closure on how the story started, what with Rarity appearing in a porn movie and all. It'd feel a bit weird to not wrap that up, and I'm actually really curious how she ended up doing a porno. But I understand if your interests/what you want the story to be has changed since originally starting this story.

ARE YOU BRAIN DEAD MAN!!!:pinkiegasp:

Bring on the porn and, RAVAGE THAT LADY!!!!!!:flutterrage:

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Oh no! Not this time! You did that romantic ending for, Spike and Twilight in, Size Doesn't Matter! And that was cool, ending with kisses and cuddles.

But this title and the ending of this chapter?! Oh no, when a mare, a LADY tells you to "Ruin Her"?! Someone is getting fucked on, into, and/or through something!:trollestia:

Do what needs to be done! BRING! ON! THE POOOOOOORN!!!!!:moustache::raritystarry:

I'm for the PR0N ending thank you very much.

Please write the pr0n, I need Spike to give Rarity that schmeat!

That was adorable. I'd be fine with it ending there, but by all means, write another chapter if you have the idea for it!

Is say write it if your up to it. People can choose to end the story here if they wish.

I'm going to agree with most everyone who has commented before me, and request permission to lay eyes upon the wonders of your magnificently smutty words.

i mean, it is called banging a pornstar.

Hah, accidental famous pornstars. I love it. Hell of a thing to be known for. Hell, that could be a whole other story in and of itself.

At least Rarity probably appreciates it on some level. :duck:

And yeah we really do like our smut, don't we? Hard not to want it, given the premise here specifically, but I can sorta understand the desire to have left it alone before. I definitely got the sense that motives and priorities changed between starting this story and finishing it. But for what it's worth, romantic (and just a bit raunchy) Sparity smut is always my favorite genre here, so I'm glad you saw it through to cumpletion. :raritywink:

Many thanks for writing, duder.

--CG

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Always glad to know you're reading, broski.
~ Yr. Pal, B

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