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To live a life of self-indulgence and pleasure, to find enjoyment in committing the taboo and acts of unspeakable nature. To find lust in blood, cum from gore, and to be wetted between the loins at the sigh of pain and ecstasy mixing into one despicably erotic cocktail. Imagine being able to derive pleasure from watching others write simultaneously in pain and bliss, creating a living paradox, wearing gore to juxtapose the setting of sex. In reality to imagine being the deliver or receiver of such a fate is both sickening, and gut-wrenchingly fascinating. Ultimately that is the best word to describe this fiction: Fascinating. Would the guard have even killed her if offered the opportunity? It seems like a no brainer, but... even now I don't think the answer is as straightforward as we'd think. Us humans derive pleasure from pain, that is true, and at the height of bliss we would even forgive our enemies, unless that bliss is the sight of our enemies being vanquished that is. But if the answer is a straightforward: Yes. Then think about it. This is Luna's lust, her grand experiment. She gets a rush, a surge of pleasure, upon having her victim not even want to retaliate. It is truly the height of domination, the only way to truly reign over someone is to take their life away, and for them to not want to take yours... Being an immortal hedonist is a bitch.
Follow your dreams, Luna!
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Your editor couldn't stomach something that tame?
7948735 That's what I told him. To each is their own, I suppose.
>Sees CoffeeBean posted new story
>Gets excited
>Reads description
7948824 Have no fear, Mr. Ott. I've got something far better than this coming within the next week.
Yummy
7948840 On a scale of 1 to yes, how much would you like a sequel that involves Luna and Celestia in a dream sequence?
with a lot more gore involved.
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Huh, dream sequence, sex and gore, but all taking place in the mind...
Cough Nightmare Moon Cough
7948860 yes, more plz. Ohhhh. . The things that can be done in a dream... I might write that.
I'm just commenting on the picture.
Isn't that a fire hazard?
7949706 Only sissies and people in the Air Force worry about hazards.
7949728 riiiiight ill just put the fire station on speed dial.
7949735 Don't bother, I've got like 7 fire extinguishers.
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So you were worried lol... Or you set things on fire on a regular basis.
7949793 I'm worried about the fact I catch things on fire a lot. We'll put it that way. My huge collection of ammunition also doesn't help.
7949805 Oh whatcha got? I got a AR .762 semi-auto rifle 12 guage shotgun that stores 6 rounds, a 700 model Remington 45 m&p shield, 9mm Beretta and a simple .22 rugger for the pigeons.
7949872 FINALLY ANOTHER GUN PERSON.
5.56 AR-15, it's a basic bitch MP15 sporter. Quad rail, carry handle iron sights, foregrip and flashlight.
5.45x39 Vepr with a PSO-1
some rinky dink little .410 gauge break action I got from my grandpa
Yugo SKS
a very nice hex-bolt Mosin Nagant
and lastly a Yugoslavian M24/47 chambered in 8mm Mauser.
Still no 12 gauges. I plan on fixing than soon, however; I'm looking to get a Vepr in 12 gauge.
7949893 like your autos and semi autos huh? How's the yugo handle?
I'm more partial to my shot gun and my 45. There's just something satisfying about the pump. And 45's recoil just says "respect me or ill take your finger off" I hope to get a desert eagle by the end of the year.
7950361 by Yugo do you mean the SKS or the Mauser?
Basically, they're both fun as frig. My SKS is really low recoil and is an absolute joy to shoot. In fact, i took down my first elk with it. The Mauser is the definition of a shoulder buster, it its still kina light, not too long, and is in nice condition.
7950466 Never had the chance to fire a mauser I hear the recoil's heavy. They'd be right up my alley too. I prefer heavy recoil it makes you think twice about every shot. Its why I dont use the 22 in any real capacity anymore.
shes grinning at Celestia i assume
also lost it at "filthy bi-sexual" xD
Another complaint i could have is that: submissives are the ones actually in charge as they dictate the pace and when/if to stop. :Pnot in this case their not heheI like the lore you created, fits pretty well, but gore to such extent isnt my thing so doubt i will be reading the sequel (the Celestia one rage kept me going, here i just felt pity for the guy what makes it even worse then just not liking gore.)
Besides the only thing that kept me going was that i kept laughing thinking about a stream i just watched with some big youtubers, where they discussed some pretty interesting topics, but the funny one was skywilliams reciting the fourteen words.
7957623 thats an odd blunder. Dunno how i missed that one. Thanks for telling me, and thanks for reading!
7958131 might be more mistakes in the gory parts of the story but i mostly glanced over them, but you know what screw it, have a like and ill probably read the sequel you plan but again probably going to just skim the gory parts, especially if its going to be even more so then this.
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News to me.
Is it? The story seems to contradict itself on whether she's done this before.
Are you sure? That's not what
looks like to me.
Sounds like a lot of weasel words to me.
She certainly seems to think so, but I'm rooting for events to give her a sense of perspective. It's hard to keep a secret from everybody, especially when you like to deliberately talk about it right in front of them. Languages can be learned, and conversations can be remembered, recorded or magically replayed.
Edit: And animals are apparently sapient and have language. Eventually the bats are going to notice that their brothers tend to disappear in the vacinity of the castle; assuming one doesn't manage to overhear a session and escape to tell the tale directly.
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wow so edge
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I'm slightly surprised that someone could read this and not rage at everything from the cliché- and non-sequitur-filled opening banter at the beginning to Celestia's limp-forekneed "punishment" of Luna at the end. Including the victim's lack of a proper struggle, however futile, and even Luna's aimlessly meandering sex/torture technique.
7958793 Stress and pain can also stimulate the serotonin and melatonin production in the brain, which transforms painful experiences into pleasure. The release of epinephrine and norepinephrine in pain can also cause a pleasurable 'rush'. People can experience pleasure from pain, otherwise the existence of S&M/BDSM fetishes probably wouldn't exist, only to sadists, and its popularity with modern culture would be near non-existent.
7958793 Eh you learn to take the good with the bad and try to see the good/fun stuff in the bad ones. The
cliché banter at the beginning is quiet fun to me at least. I can agree on the somewhat lacking reaction of Celestia, to be fair it is the forth time Luna did this so by this point Celestia might be "over" it you could argue, but still we are talking about Luna taking a life here so unless you wish to characterize Celestia as emotionless/uncaring about the well being of others, there should have been a stronger reaction true.
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In the SM/BDSM fetishes the power lies withing the one who is being dominated/receiving the pain/pleasure. Here its something completely different as the victim is rendered powerless where in the fetish play the "victim" hold the true power and can end it whenever they desire, should the dominating one not adhere to the wishes of the dominated, you can expect they will have a hard time finding partners in the future.
Here though its simple survival instinct, or better said a lack of in this story. Feels kind of like the bat went "Oh well ill die, what can you do *shrugs*"
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I'm no expert, but I'd imagine that generally the serotonin and melatonin only serve to mitigate and help us withstand pain, not actually make it enjoyable. Otherwise self-inflicting and pursuing pain for pleasure would be normal, rather than being considered a fetish. That would be a bit of an evolutionary handicap.
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I think it's pretty clear that this isn't canon Celestia. But she does at least seem to have concern for Luna's well being, if only because it reflects on herself and/or because she hopes that she'll let her molest her someday.
That's the theory, or at least the PR line. But it's not hard to find evidence of counterexamples if you spend enough time looking in dark corners.
I wonder whether there's some kind of ambient pony magic in this story that makes animals subservient to ponies. I think I read a theory to that effect about the show once.
7959037 The serotonin and melatonin are released alongside the endorphins to create a 'cocktail' of sorts in your biology to make you withstand the pain, although in S&M the appeal is when the pain subsides the trickle of endorphins remain. I think the best way everybody experiences this sensation of pleasure from pain is that feeling you get after getting hurt, where the pain slowly dissipates, you're left with a relief of sorts. Imagine if you were anticipating the arrival of pain, and after the pain subsides you get a feeling of 'relief' that just feels good. The endorphins released from the brain are supposed to override the signals from your nerves telling you 'you're in pain now', so you no longer feel it. If you're anticipating it, and brace for it, the brain is ready and alert to deal with it. The pain is less, and the endorphins are overpower it. Whereas if you were suddenly just slapped in the face, it hurts. I dappled very lightly in this topic, so I'm not an expert. All I really have is anecdotes, but I don't really count that as proof of anything.
I left for 3 hours to go shooting with my dad and I come back to this. Wtf guys.
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A lot of things that people would consider pain is, for me, just plain pleasure (non-erotic) from the get-go, with the added benefits of endorphins on top of it. I don't have any known fetish for pain whatsoever so far though I'm open to discovering one. Having bruises and applying pressure feels fantastic. Having the occasional small infection or swelling around my hand gives me hours of entertainment. Having a toothache is so so fun and intensely pleasurable. I just love it. After a day or two I suppose I've tapped out most of the endorphins and I might get into the boring-pain territory and then I just lose interest.
In regards to real perceived pain, there is also non-erotic benefits that could be pursued. When I'm locked-in to a situation with danger or pain, it's an exercise in being 'in the present moment' instead of being lost in my normal mental stories and distorted priorities. Whenever I've gotten to my psychological breaking point period, my mental priorities were rearranged towards the simplicity of existence and discovering what really matters to me now. I got to be with a part of myself that I lost touch with, shedding so much of my normal identity and becoming a squirming animal desperate for survival with no inhibitions. The worst prisons are mental and it feels so good to be free. Some of the benefits are similar to meditation's, but this is immeasurably more adventurous and effective (and in that state I'm not even attached to results or caring about benefiting from my trouble, which is pretty much the most liberating part).
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...Did I do something? I'll grant that maybe it was rude to jump into the discussion without introducing myself or directly addressing the story. Hi; interesting (and infuriating) story.
I don't exactly agree with that, at least in my case. I've kind of been involved in non-erotic torture games. I have the benefit of a merciless dom who is not afraid to act against my will and do things that I very much do not like for extended periods of time past my comfort zone. If it were too tame or if she let up then I'd hardly reach my psychological breaking point where I see the priority of being truly present with reality. It's really intense. By the way, even though my dom is non-erotic, she'll still do things like rub my cock when she knows I'm definitely not in the mood as an additional form of torture. Anyway, the sub really needs to be powerless and overstepped for this to work. Otherwise you're missing almost all the intensity of the experience.
7959686 No, it's just I logged in to find 16 notifications. It was jarring. I have no problem with you guys discussing shit, lol. I agree with some of the points you made. Not all, but some.
Also I haven't even read this argument. I... like... don't care enough about this fic to try and defend it.
It's poorly written, shameless clop. I didn't even plan on publishing it, but it gained me like 6 followers and a bunch of comments, so whatevs.
7959709 Its not clop is whatever you would call a ponified version of snuff porn :P
Also this song might fit Luna somewhat:
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I might have worded it wrong, but even for you there exists some limit does it not, its not like she can just whip out a knife/saw whatever and start hacking away without a care. There needs to exists some trust and understanding of limits and i assume that you have some sort of safe word for if things go way over the top (although if your both experienced and trusting/understanding enough it might never come into use). if not then its because you decided to set it up that way. But generally the safeword is considered a important part of the relationship isnt it and it is within the subs power to invoke it (but the dom can also do it i believe?).
Its your fetish so you enjoy it of course and wont throw it around left and right but limts exist. For some their higher for some their lower.
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Of course it isnt canon Celestia as its CoffeeBeans version for this story, i more questioned if Celestia actually is "sane" as she thinks she is, or rather just less "visibly" insane then Luna.
Its a "extreme" so to speak of, but its not a norm.
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Yeah, presumably she's not allowed to kill me, but she's not telling me the rules. In fact, she won't dialogue with me at all, better that I be in the proverbial echo chamber of my own futile pleas so I can hear what my ego sounds like. It's not really a fetish even though it may look like it; it's better described as being stimulated by uncomfortable torture. She won't stop until inevitably I stop caring about the discomfort and have absolutely no fear of anything she might do, then she loses interest and eventually stops. There's no safe words, and in fact it's most powerful when the torture sessions are initiated against my will in the first place because it feels all the more real.
Still, you might say we have an understanding because we've known each other for awhile. I would say there are no limits of what I'd allow because I get so fearless after my breaking point that she theoretically could start hacking away with saw or knife and I would just continue to feel ecstatic freedom from my human-conditioned state of consciousness. Maybe I'm a special case, but I like the dom to have absolute power over me with no limitation, it just feels so much more real it just doesn't make sense otherwise.
7960744 I'm amazed a dialogue about the technicalities of BDSM related fetishes has started in the comment section of this story.
This site is amazing.
7960752 I have a relevant comment to your story.
She probably wasn't expecting him to be such a little bitch, I mean fuck! She would've been doing him a favor if she cranked up the pain or something so he wouldn't have died such a pussy death.
7961177 I dunno, I'd be spooked if someone was ripping apart my spine with their horn.
7961193 Fair enough, there are a lot of factors. If it were me in the story as it's written, I probably would've had a good buzz going, especially at the cutting off oxygen to the brain part. A few years ago I would've been just as fearful as this bat.
7961213 asphyxiation is hot as fuck. At least he didn't feel pain for most of it.
...Please write more of this? The personalities are perfect, the gore is wonderfully written, the way the batpony (very clever how you did that) was afraid and turned on and so clearly in love, it's beautiful... There is so little real, romantic gore and snuff on this site. Ponies suffocate only to be stopped at the last moment, or they're woken after merely slipping unconscious, and some of the best gore here is merely for crude shock value. Asphyxiation, broken necks, broken bones, removed heads, no romance behind those until now. The greatest tragedy of this story is that it skips over the batpony's death, because that would have completed it. And the way Celestia has become so casual about it by now...
You have earned yourself a new follower for sure, and a very interested fan. Please, more of this!
Edit: and the cuddling, especially the cuddling! It's a shame you had Celestia cut it short because Luna's right, it's very very nearly as good as the act itself!
7963150 Lucky for you, I am writing more. I have a sequel coming soon; it's in the works as I type this. Thanks a bunch for... everything! Glad you liked it so much, and it's cool to see someone else who enjoys this stuff.
7976680 I too got a kick out of the multi-lingual thing. I mean, it's not too far fetched. They've both been alive for like 2000 years. That's quite a bit of spare time.
Thanks for the comment, btw, and thanks for reading! I got a sequel to this in the works.
7976719 Actually... I've already written like, half of it, and the way it plays out means that there isn't more german... sadly.
I'll see what I can whip up, though. Maybe at the end.
vot da fock
I don't even know why I clicked.
curiosity is a bitch. >:c
7995423 straight up.
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7960744
This is scary and exciting all at once...
"CONFUSION!!!"
- Krieg
I appreciate that you didn't nullify his fear, that Luna did her best to comfort him through it.
8075075 h-holy shit. A story approver commented on my thing.
This is a first. Also, thank you for the follow! I... I'm flattered.
To address your comment; thank you. I wanted to show that Luna's... a bit messed in the head, but isn't a total psychopath, and doesn't really enjoy hurting others. If you noticed, she felt quite horrible when he expressed his fears.
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It's interesting the dichotomy displayed. To be clear, she likes the act of maiming, but not the pain or suffering it causes--purely the physical aspect?