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Daedelus


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Need an Editor · 9:58pm Jul 24th, 2023

I have a chapter for Accursed completed after some time away. I just want someone to look over it all and offer some criticism. Particularly my grammar and pacing as I feel this is where I'm lacking most. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

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