Donovan Crowley works as a Royal Blacksmith for the Guard. Ever since his arrival he has been ridiculed and tormented by everypony he meets. One night in his dreams, he meets an enemy once thought to be destroyed.
I have a chapter for Accursed completed after some time away. I just want someone to look over it all and offer some criticism. Particularly my grammar and pacing as I feel this is where I'm lacking most. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Things are really rough at the moment and unfortunately I have to go back to California. So I'm currently occupied with the move many other things, my stories will be placed on hiatus until I get myself together.
Hey folks, I'm steadily trying to get back into writing. Its been a rough few weeks along with my prior mental dilemma, I'm also out of a job and I'm trying to get my car back up and running.
So yeah, Chapter 5 is a quarter of the way finished. Also gonna try and make newer (perhaps older) chapters bigger.
I know you are all waiting for news on the next chapter, and I just had to log in and say it's kind of in limbo. I won't go in-depth because I want to spare all of you the sad details, but prior issues with my mental health have made a resurgence, and I'm currently struggling. I've spent some stashed cash on therapy to see if I can get some help. If not then well, I don't know what.
I have a chapter for Accursed completed after some time away. I just want someone to look over it all and offer some criticism. Particularly my grammar and pacing as I feel this is where I'm lacking most. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors/forum
This should help you find editors
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