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Bronyxy


Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork

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This story is a sequel to Celestia x Rainbow - The Truest Love


This fic is set between S1 E16 "Sonic Rainboom" and S2 E04 "Luna Eclipsed".

Celestia lost her truest love, Rainbow Dash when she accidentally altered her own timeline.

The shock of her loss drives her to retreat into alcohol misuse, and as her world implodes only one pony can save her.

Will she ever be free to find love again?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

Oh geez, this can ONLY go well. (He said, knowing something is going to go dramatically wrong.)

My prediction: Rainbow Dash of the previous timeline gets tired of waiting and travels back in time to just after Celestia left. When she doesn't find her, she travels forward in time again to find Celestia with Twilight and the soap opera ensues.

Sequel, please? It can't end there.

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Thanks for the interesting ideas - weird things start to happen when you play with timelines!
Cue theme of your favorite soap opera โ€ฆ
:pinkiegasp:

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Oh, thereโ€™s a number of ways this could go, but youโ€™ll have to wait and see โ€ฆ
Thanks for your support!
:raritywink:

9312529
No problem. Do you know how long it'll take before the next part?

Loving the story so far (I'm not done with it), but do you have a full sized version of the image you used in the description? Your source only leads to a picture of the bed itself.

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It took me six months to get around to writing this sequel, so no promises ...
:twilightblush:

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Glad to hear you're enjoying the story!
When I do the cover art for my stories, I typically combine a variety of images from different sources and draw them together as a collage. When I have to complete the link to the source, this presents a bit of a problem, so I link to the piece that formed the majority of the finished image, and that's generally the background.
Sorry I can't give you a better answer.

Poor celestia she just wanted her rainbow dash back, I wish I was rainbow dash so I can alter my history and come back to her

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You're right, Celestia's got it bad, but at least she's got a true friend in Twilight.

9315744
I enjoyed this story also I put it in my favorite

9315746
Thank you for your kind words - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
:twilightsmile:

9315762
No problem :ajsmug: you are a great writer

Instead will you write another rainbow dash x celestia, because I can't wait to see your writing style ๐ŸŒˆ x โ˜€

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I haven't done any more Celestia x Rainbow stories, but I have written other romances you may like, such as Twilight's Dawning, Written in the Stars, A Dash of Rarity and Above All Others.

Please feel free to have a look through these stories or any others in my back catalogue that catch your eye, and I hope you enjoy them too.

:ajsmug::yay::pinkiehappy::raritywink::twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh:

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Well I got great ideas for a story

9321363
Excellent news, I'm so pleased for you!
I hope you enjoy the thrill of writing a story and that it all works out well for you - good luck!

:twilightsmile:

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Thanks - I had to give them a happy ending

:twilightsmile:

Okay. Was enjoying seeing Celestia, earlier, in a way I had not before, but your description there of the moon becoming reacquainted with Luna stole the show. Again, something I had not seen someone pull off before.

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Thank you for your kind words.
It's great when it works!
Thanks for your support - always appreciate your comments!

:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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