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SteamHare


Open for Writing Commissions. Welcome to the smut zone. If you want depth, look elsewhere. If you want length, you've come to the right place.

Comments ( 14 )

awesome dude, love the premise, can't wait to see how thee relationship between the three of them will go, sound like a lot of fun. Also you might waht to add the Alt.uni tag to avoid any confutions. Also if you are looking to commission a cover art let me know would love to do something for this.
here is a speedpainting of mine enjoy the view.

By the way I wonder what changed in history that Shining got short, didn't get Cadence and and somehow got into a relationship with Flash instead, Did Cadance cast a spell to ship them together so that Shining would stop bugging her maybe?

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A significantly more interesting take then the real reason which is mostly "because porn logic"

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Here is another one you could use, Twilight unknowingly cast a spell or made Shinning drink someting that stunted his groth as a stallion which the effects was too gradual for anypony to notice and kept his from growing into his full size, it might even have been at the time he hit puberty. It could even be their groth size were inverted sense Flash seemed pretty small for a royal guard when we first saw him in EqG. Would be nice to see a flash back or an explenation of how they both became a couple when they were in high school.

Nice chapter nice to see a little tid bit about what happened differently in this time line, still hopping to see how they actually fell in love like that

Nice Shining gets to be on his first real power trip with his colt friend and Flash is happy with it.

Awesome chapter loved seeing Sunburst getting his CUM-uppens from what he did to Shining which he fully deservers.

Sorry forgot to comment awesome chapter dude your really make this reading fun, keep it up.

This week's chapter will be late due to busyness. Will post it next Thursday.

Will there still be updates on this story again? Don't worry dude you'll get more attention over time and putting it in the right groups

I've put your story in multiple group so that it can get the chance to get more attention, hope it helps you a little

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Sorry been absolutely swarmed with IRL stuff. Ill throw up the next chapters soon

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No problem dude, take the time you need.

This is a fun read, the only thing that bugs me is proportioning. I've always had a little ocd reaction when it seems that human proportions are applied to 'equines' xD it always seems so small xD

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