Double Flash

Mix-up

Mix-up #1 · Feb 4th, 2022 · 4 · 2 ·

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This was a fun read, keep it up.

dannny43

dannny43 #2 · Feb 4th, 2022 · · ·

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bruh

SteamHare

SteamHare #3 · Feb 4th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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11141750

I feel not a single iota of shame.

Mockingbirb

Mockingbirb #4 · Feb 4th, 2022 · · ·

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Why does this story have an M rating on it? I don't see why that's necessary.

No other complaints, though.

SteamHare

SteamHare #5 · Feb 4th, 2022 · · ·

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11141910

Mostly be "safe rather than sorry" and to be able to use the short description I wanted.

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #6 · Mar 17th, 2022 · · ·

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Go fuck yourself. She had screamed the words at him after she had slammed the un-ketchuped food into his face.

that is indeed a childish argument over the dumbest thing! Flash is definitely better off without her it seems lol

A quick trip through the mirror portal to have the weirdest masturbation session across worlds was not a logical response to breaking up with one’s girlfriend. He was acting like a dork and he just knew this was going to backfire in his face.

sure it's not logical, but it is a great and correct decision imo

His wings chafed against the jacket that had somehow managed to make it through the portal with him. Despite the irritation it caused, it was a minor comfort in a sea of nude ponies.

exactly! Flash needs his jacket to distinguish him from pony Flash, just like how Sci-Twi ended up with her glasses

“T-that you do, uhhhhhhh…” Flash tried to think up a potential pony name, “... Steve?”

wow, Flash is almost as bad at coming up with pony names as me!

“Yep, will do, Clear buddy ol’ pal o’ mine.” With a final too wide smile, Flash galloped off not seeing the exasperated head shake that followed after him.

haha, he is so hopeless!

“Right, magic pony world.”

yeah, smartphones are so much easier

He had sunglasses perched on his head, a few earrings in his right ear, and wore a heavy jacket with patches sewn into the back.

the cooler Flash Sentry

“Yeah,” Flash mumbled, “I don’t why this is so hard. You were doing exactly what I wanted you to do.”
“Caress your thigh?” Sentry said with a wide grin.“No, to fuck you,” Flash felt his cheeks burn, “I mean, to fuck me! Wait, that didn’t come out right either.”
Sentry chuckled good-naturedly, “Yeah, I had a good idea that was the case.” Flash stared at him blankly. “We’re each other and frankly I’d fuck me.” He looked over Flash again and grinned widely. “Oh yeah, I’d definitely fuck me.”

dang, pony Flash Sentry is smooth!

“It’s hard, though!” Flash threw his hooves in the air in exasperation. “I don’t want people to not like me, and I need people to like me.” He cut through the air with his wings to emphasize his point. “I don’t like to be alone, and if someone knew me as… me, I—” he scrunched up his face miserably, “what if… what if they don’t like what they see?”

oof! i always love this interpretation of Flash's character, which also fits how his place in the show developed in a meta sense. it definitely also says a lot about how clearly not-right Sunset is for Flash, if Flash manages to leave her multiple times despite this complex!

“I did, and trust me when I say that I felt loneliest when I was with them then when I wasn’t.” Sentry shook his head. “Being alone and being alone are two very different states of being, and it’s important to be able to distinguish that.”

i really like how this works as a fic about meeting your past/future self, since i get the sense pony Flash is significantly older than EqG Flash here, and certainly more settled into himself at any rate. really great advice from one version of a person to another

Sentry was also more… sensual. Sunset was fiery and passionate, very in the moment. Sentry, though, whether due to experience or just simply being of a different gender, felt more affectionate. More than just one sided need. With Sunset, he kissed her for her, with Sentry it was for both of them.

aww! this is so very nice! this would also come with a more mature and caring partner, but i like to think that them being the same person leading to caring about the same things in sex contribute as well. that's def part of the appeal of selfcest, in that there's probably less worry about whether or not you like the same things

Sentry grinned. “Lead the way, me.”

hehehe, case in point

“If you want some advice on how to deal with this, I’d suggest you take your own advice and go fuck yourself. Did wonders for me!”

if the point of the entire fic was to lead up to this, i am not at all disappointed

With a mock salute, Flash continued past Sunset, ignoring her attempts to call out to him, and into the school while humming a happy tune.

love the mental image of this scene!

“Hey, Soarin, what’s up? While I have you, are you busy this Friday?” He gave Soarin a massive grin. “There’s this band I really like that I want to see.”

aww, character growth!

really great work! love how you use the contrast between the two Flashes here, and young Flash's complexes just feel very real. this story could have worked perfectly well as a self-ponidox character study, but just how solidly the selfcest plot is built on the understandably resentful reaction to Sunset's words, and how learning what good sex is like underscores Flash's developing sense of self-worth, both really bring the themes of the fic together. it's exactly the kind of serious story i hoped to get out of this strange contest, and makes it all worth it. thank you so much!

dertoxbraid