Alas, I am a very peculiar pansexual strawberry with a particularly practical skill for painting purple stuff.
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Can't wait to read it!
I think this needs a dark tag after what Cadence just did... she really is awful now, slipping into the zone where you can't have sympathy for her. And even if this story does continue there's not much anyone can do about it. Expect, what, tell Princess Luna and Celestia on her?
Aside from that, I can see that this story doesnt highlight its sex scenes, but any chance you'll ever do a full rendition of Cadence's first time ruining the maid. That sounded like one for the history books.
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Huh. I thought I did tag dark. Whoopsie.
And yes, I do eventually plan on revisiting this and writing in the sex scenes. I had wanted to do so originally, but I ran out of time to submit (or so I thought.) Keep an eye out for it in the coming months, and I'd recommend tracking the story, as I'll post an update blog whenever that happens.
I hope you liked the story, and can't wait for further feedback!
i dislike everyone in this story, everyone is an asshole, but if it had sex scenes it would be pretty amazing considering the situation
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Well, as stated below, I had wanted to do that but I just didn't have the time. I do plan to revisit this and add them in.
And yeah, everyone is an asshole. It's kind of the point. People are actually horrible. People are assholes, liars, cheaters, and fakes. I mean, take me for example.
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Looking forward to it
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I'm glad you liked it!
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Well, I was hardly expecting such an in depth review! Thank you! And I'm very glad you liked it, and saw fit to comment on it!
And I've been noticing that a lot, my somewhat misanthropic nature taking a hard affect on my writing. Everything I've been doing lately seems to delve into people just being awful or feeling awful. Even my most recent upload on here, despite being a relatively happy story, has an underlying theme of self-loathing and remorse.
But I'm working on changing that. Maybe. If there's a market for it, I won't.
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Yes, but I want to write professionally, so I need to write for set market demographics.
This was an interesting read
This was honestly incredibly well written excellent job~!
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Thank you very much for the feedback