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Bronze Inkwell


Hello to all the bronies and pegasisters. I'm a writer for fun and I am beginning to make Youtube videos of stories that I think deserve to be told.

Comments ( 206 )

Another Alex Mercer Displaced? That guy sure is popular to displace.

10008642
Well he has the DNA of his normal self and James Heller, right now he just chooses to be Alex Mercer.

10008648
What happened to his normal human name?

10008666
I haven't put it in yet, I like a bit of mystery after all. And the reason he goes by Alex Mercer is because he is currently disguised as him.

10008677
Ah, makes sense. Just don't keep it permanently as Alex, otherwise he won't be unique compared to whom he is disguised as.

10008679
But of course. Like I said, he has his own DNA as well as James Heller's. It just depends on who he (I) feels like being.

When will the next chapter be out

welp this is the third displace that uses this world that i have read. first with giant mechs second the deadra from the oblvion crises being lead by a displace and now this.

Well, I like the fic, I hope the next chapter!

10008728
nope i just wish i could find the mech one again.

Just be careful writing this Chaos.😟 Cause now, you got my attention.

How about takking off the supressor .

Second hrere is a suggestion .

Use both of any .

Scoond how about Hammer blade and hammer spiked bludgedon or hammer blade bludgedon .

The hammer blade could be basicly with density of hammer fist but with sharp edge like bludgedon decreasing a bit of the weght and power but could cutt and smash at the same time .

the hammer spike bludgedon having spiky growths like which could do aditional puncture and bash .

and hammer fist blade bludgedon is like vvery exotic blade . it has like dge or gussed like the blade butr as well protrusions like the ... wing blade sort of from dying light sort and doing hevier blows as allready sharpened blade .

10008815
How about a Spiked Hammer-Whipfist?

Have the Whipfist but instead of the end being a sharp blade, It's a spiky Hammerfist. An upgrade to the medieval flail with a lot more range and power.

10008821
First off stupid question man, never ask something like that.:ajbemused: Second, I like where your thing here is going. I'm also saying be careful with your character, and I like to see more conflicts.:rainbowdetermined2:

The psae is fast, calm down and take a little more time writing, or this will be a disaster, the idea is good, just don't rush yourself.

10008833
And there will be more conflict. But what kind of conflict is yet to be seen.

10008836
I'm trying to, but it's hard to do that for me. This is one of my attempts at trying to write a bit slower and I'm using you guys, the people who comment on it, as a reference. So far, it seems that I'm doing a good job. But I feel I need to slow down even more. What do you think?

10008826
Hahaha , Good idea . but still the same weaknessas chain link .

But that hammer fist blade is something basicly heavy sharpened very wide club . Do you know wehe cutting edge owhen is chopping the wood hitting that edge in the wood . The hammer blade could do crushing damage and slice . could be more controlled than flail if it is air crush or basicly if the budgedon has sharpened edge instead spikes . but more wider adding more crush than slice .

plus is hard to miss and block a very heavy baseball bat (which basicly is hammerfist) but when it is as well sharpened could add both blunt and OBLITERATING HACK /CHOP BASH) AND Iwonder first if the blade cold stand and could slide the blade on the edges .

10008849
Hmm, so like a giant Axe/Hammer combo? One end being that of an Axe but the other side is the blunt end of a Hammer.

10008860
Technicly yes but it is more like sharpened club and no hadle for the ane like a club .

Something akin Demon club but with actual blade (that would e the cLUB SSWORD/GREATSWORD BLUDGEDON HIBRID .

https://monsterhunter.fandom.com/wiki/Demonlord_Club_(MHGU)

And sharpened https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Ceremonial_Macuahuitl.jpg

Just imagine averagdege baseball bat . But make just a little sharper while saving the ... wight of the bat .
If it is made a swing it would be wider , it may do blunt damage even bit lesser the sharpened thing may cut as well

But as Iimagine the wight is the same but it has the same wight but just roughtly sharpened dealing heavy damage as great sword/axe/club thing

if it is too impractical mayy befor special cases . it is theory it may be beter impact than blade with more crush force adding power .

between hammer fist and sword removing less from the hammerfist to make the edge to crude looking sharp awide appendage

10008868
Interesting designs, though I don't know how effective they might be with the Blacklight virus. And you must remember that the blades would be as sharp as possible, down to the very molecule. So the bladed one might not be as effective as the arm blade. As for the club, I just can't see the spikes being very useful since they are pointing upwards.

Now if that was applied to the Whipfist with the end being a point and the rest of the spike being surrounded in smaller spikes pointing inwards, then that could be quite useful for not only a weapon, but also a tool.

10008878
That could be too .

Or insted flailing bludgedon is not iit better if it is flalining a blade ?

or depends of the situation . if bludgedon is not doing than something else

10008949
For nothing I just like sending music to people but if you have request what type of music you like I can send that to.

OH very nice, a Displaced/FoE fanfic combined, I don't think anyone made one of those before, got to say it's doing good and I can't wait to see how things turn out, mainly due to the lost interest of FoE by many fans over the last few years now.

10008952
Classical Dupstep if possible. It's my favorite.

10008967
I think that at least some Displaced/FoE are out there, you just need to look for them. But I do agree that I am one of the few who did this. And while I don't necessarily like the idea of a standard FoE, I do like the idea of it becoming a war between a resistance versus the invading force.

10009027
Very good! I like it but there isn't enough, as Vinyl Scratch would say, Wubs. I was thinking more along the lines of this.

10009242
Love it but I have one for you.

10009246
Yes! This is some very good shit right here! Exactly what I look for.

10009243
Ого, американцы не ненавидят русских. Сука, давайте убьём Путина!

10009253
Хотя все американцы не ненавидят русских, я не люблю убивать в реальной жизни. Только в видеоиграх и книгах.

10009254
Hahahaha! This is the best thing ever! Very good, very good indeed my friend!

10009274
Хотя call off duty modern warfare 2019 оскорбил меня лично, хоть я не горжусь тем что я русский, но даже мне было обидно смотреть на сюжет. Ну почему русские всегда плохие?

10009294
Я думаю, что это в основном из-за предвзятости Америки против русских. У меня лично нет проблем с русскими, но остальная Америка либо рассматривает Россию как шутку или серьезную угрозу. Как это ни печально.

10009312
Мне интересно, когда будет следующая глава? Меня заинтриговало это произведение! Хочеться спеть гимн Белоруссии, ведь мои предки с отцовской линии от туда. Хотя Беларусь не лучше страна чем Россия и Украина.

10009331
Ну, Америка не совсем то золотое яйцо, которым она разыгрывается. Иногда я думаю, что в других странах это лучше, чем в Америке. Конечно, у нас есть хорошие технологии, но что хорошего во всем этом, когда кто-то им не делится? Я верю, что единственное будущее для людей - это оставить в стороне наши мелкие разногласия и собраться вместе. Такие вещи, как космическая гонка и все эти войны для чего? Чтобы получить права хвастовства? Чтобы подняться выше другого? Это глупо. Люди могут быть невероятно умными, но мы все невероятно упрямые, глупые и повсюду враждебные друг другу без причины.

10009354
Хорошая мораль парень, я с тобой полностью согласен.

10009397
Это в основном моя мораль.

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