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Shadowflameking


What fun is there in making sense? -Discord, Lord Of Chaos.

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This is what I call an epic entrance to a massacre.

~99 displaced fics on the wall
~knock one down, dislike it around
~199 displaced fics on the wall

9150124
A joke.

Because there are too many displaced fics.


WAY TOO MANY

9150130
agreed but i couldnt think of another way for this guy to turn into the lich

well shit, poor rainbow. i cringed hard even as i smiled at the demonic stoicism of the lich

9150196
Then don't have him turn into a lich.

9150235
but thats the point of the damned story to begin with -.-

9150115
If that's the case, then why aren't ya saying the same thing about the other genres such as HiE/human turn ponies/romance stories/stories about lesbian ponies/clops/etc? Afterall, there are things far worse out there.

displaced fic,don't like those kinda fics? then fuck off

Boy howdy, you know it's a good fic when the author is insulting people in the description.

9150377
Shadows had a bad run in with certain people who tend to bash Displaced because of the genre rather than the story itself, even the most well written Displaced stories have been bashed in the beginning, only to become popular later on.

9150420
It's just kind of weird because it reminds of a weird Onision video where he literally had to say that he had to itch his neck because it was itchy, and not so he looks better. it's like that fact that the person has to bring it up, makes people kind of wary of them.

9150438
It'd be best just to let the author do what he wants to do despite the positive and/or negative he shows, self-taught is often the best way.

9150444
How is someone supposed to be self taught if they get to do what ever they want?

9150469
Allow them notice their own mistakes, allow them to realize that what they once denied was actually the truth. For example, say you wrote a story five or ten years ago, you go to reread it, you realize how bad it is and thus you'll want to rewrite it.

9150366
I am saying the same thing about those as well.

to quote dorkly



huh neat

9150223
* snaps fingers and points *

Ayyyy~

9150377
its because ppl tend to displike displaced stories before even reading them,that is why,if you dislike it? fine! i dont care really! but at LEAST read it before you dislike it! ya know what i mean?

so................................................................................litch king eyy sweeet




me I'm all for Gary Stu's I just love op superpowered protags that's why I miss don't underestimate me cause it had the most likable Gary Stu's

i noticed no stories about the adventure time lich king so i fixed it

Alright. I'm starting to like this. I hope this story won't be short or anything. I would love to read more of these.

9173257
oh? perhaps we should message on discord, ill send ya my discord and you can talk to me about the story ^W^

I dislike this, but I'm still going to read it in case my opinion changes.

9173879
At the present moment I do not like this story, but I can see it has potential so I will keep an eye on it.

did he just kill Daring do just like that "snap" that is a dick move :ajbemused:

9188298
he IS the lich after all lol, he don't care about life itself and nothing will stand in the way of his goal less it wishes to be terminated :p

This story has the same problem as mine. Tge DISLIKE button :( It gets disliked just because you can press it.

I looked out a window in the back and saw a giant mountain split down the middle perfectly like someone took a huge knife and sliced the mountain like someone would butter, I hopped off the train before it could pass the mountain, and started walking.

You should put pov shifts, because it is a bit confusing.

9188330
well i want some good lich's maybe some who can make a family and be a hero

I was in a large yellow room with a large flat pink guy who was on the walls, Prismo the wish master, he spoke and sounded just like he did in the show. "What can I do for ya?"

No nain nyat ei
Wrong!
It is pink guy!:pinkiehappy:

9188393
nope lich is gunna be evil

9188493
agreed he confuses me to

I like your story and I don't want to be rude but you need a editor

I was getting into your story until you started putting in modern firearms in. I was hoping you"d focus on the lich king relaying on his magic and you should look into getting an editor and maybe a proof reader.

I find your story very amusing and enjoyable to read. But you should try to get a proof reader. Not everyone can read through horrible gramer like some.

9254247
I've asked time and time again for one, but no one wants to do it, I DID have one, but he quit on me in the middle of my bill cipher story so *shrugs* if you can find me one that happens to have a discord account feel free to lemme know, ill check back every hour or so on here till 8, its 11 rn so I should see your reply if you do reply

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Wait Luna got petrified? I thought she left.

9385617

no, Cadence was petrified Luna did leave

Good we are back baby.

Can't he asks for more wishes? Thousands or infinity of them?

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