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The Phantom Joker


You'll Never See Me Comin'!

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Seeing as how you use the "And here... We... Go." quote, I'm guessing you were a fan of Heath Ledger's version of Joker?

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I'm a fan of all versions of the Joker, except the one from the old tv show and Jared Leto, mostly because I haven't seen Suicide Squad yet.

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Then I don't recommend watching Suicide Squad. At all. Yeah, Will Smith's portrayal of Deadshot was good and all, but as my mom said, you know it's a bad film if you fall asleep during it.

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But personally, I think Scar is the best Disney Villain. His plan did succeed for years before it was reversed, unlike the others where their plans eventually failed after only a few minutes.

So Alex is not going to give the virus twilight to bring her back? Is it too late to do so.

I can’t wait for the next chapter

why post the 2nd chapter again?

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Well, seeing as A: I had likes and dislikes turned off at the time and B: It had a few typos that needed correcting, I figured why the hell not?

I was excited about another chapter but then it was just a re-upload.

Muahahahah... Indestructible is the perfect character theme for this one! I’m definitely excited for what havoc Mr. Mercer wreaks next!

Great job keep it up

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Rest assured, I have the beginning of Chapter Three in development. Right now, however, I must aid my co-author with his Prototype project.

Twilight… what in the name of Faust Almighty have you unleashed upon us all?

Jeff Goldblum, that's what.

Can't wait to see more of this!

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Love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Like the story so far, hope twilight is eventually saved by Alex.

Dude, you have a terrible habit of starting a story, posting two chapters, and forgetting it ever existed. Why?

Meanwhile, perched on a nearby rooftop, Rainbow Dash, for some unknown reason and despite having a horrified expression on her face at all the destruction, found herself extremely attracted to the being who had not only saved her life, but had caused an insane amount of destruction and killed dozens of civilians and law enforcement officers, all apparently to send a message to the Traditionalists that had killed her best friend. And she, for some bizarre, perverted reason, was in love with it all. Then again, maybe it was the booze making her think this way. However, at the moment, all she could think about was one thing.

This is almost certainly going to make things interesting if Dash’s crush on Alex continues even after she fully sobers up and the two meet up again! Great story!

Also, I can’t help but wonder if a (minor(ish)) Cult will end up springing up around Zeus thanks to his power and actions. Naturally, of course, they’ll most likely be in support of the Twilight Sparkle Act thanks to their Deity outright stating his Vengeance Quest against the Traditionalists for the murder of it’s namesake.

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I haven’t really read the original story, but Twilight is kinda… I dunno… DEAD?!

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Where's the next chapter?

Damm it’s been a while

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Still waiting on my co-author to get his Protype story updated...

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Just as soon as my co-author updates his story...

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Who are he anyway? And why is he taking almost three years by now?!

continue it can't wait to see more soon:twilightsmile:

Immediately, Twilight reached into a bedside dresser drawer and pulled out three pictures. One of them was of her and her friends, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie. The second was of her and the other three Princesses, Celestia, Luna, and Cadence, all of them looking very formal and elegant in their dresses. The third was a picture of a pegasus stallion with orange fur and a blue mane and tail wearing a Royal Guard dress uniform. This was Flash Sentry, Twilight’s secret coltfriend… although, she was starting to suspect that he was getting ready to propose to her.

Why isn't Spike in those pictures?
Like he is important to her too.
It just feels wrong that Spike isn't significant enough to Twilight to be in those pictures despite he's literally by her side all of his life.

“Listen to me. I swear on my life that I hunt down the ones who killed your mother, the ones who hired them, and pretty much everyone you hate in this world, and send them off to Hell. I will search this entire Goddamn planet if I have to. And one day, when you’re older and you’re ready, you can help me to do it. Understand?” said Alex with the utmost seriousness in his voice.

Will Spike join in on the hunt or would it be too late by the time he's old enough since Alex would have already killed all of the ones directly responsible for Twilight's murder?

Is there any plans on continuing this?

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