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Mr_Jekyll_and_Dr_Hyde
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If you wanted to do this I would think it would work well with the idea from the manga Kujibiki Tokushou Musou Harem-ken, where doing only doing some things give him a chance to earn more powers, other then that i like how the story is going and would like to see me.
The fight seemed a bit too easy to me but otherwise good start, I’m looking forward to seeing more.
So.....he's a nugget
Hmm not bad thus far looks to have potential and I’m looking forward to seeing where this will lead to and how thus will turn out. Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon
Looking good so far keep it up
Quick fight, but understandable. Sombra is only a threat due to his Crystalmancy, without it he is just a jumped up Unicorn/Umbra hybrid.
Technomagic is gonna be interesting, though how useful it will be will depend on what Version of it he got.
Dark energy manipulation is gonna be a double edged sword, the ponies of Equestria will just see Dark Magic no matter how he has/will use it.
Crystal manipulation is also interesting, while it has bad connotations, it can me used to quickly fix the Empires Buildings and likely be used to find valuable energy crystals and such too.
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You have interesting ideas. I am thinking of having the technomagic power skill start as basic but as it is used more and more Jekyll will be able to use higher levels of power after mastering the current level.
Well so far so good with his first day as King and nice touch with the new throne, wonder if anything else from WH40K will come in here later on
Not bad at all
Would love to hear or read his thoughts on stuff a bit more
Other than that good job
Hmm...
Strongly. I like this Chapter. I wait patiently for the continuation. And another question will gg develop magic or be satisfied with the standard set?
Cyberpunk Equstria 2077 ??? XD
<<<<<<<< this is good for combat
Bug Waifu yayyyyyy! I wonder will he make a herd with Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon?
Well that sound typical of the world and what the changelings went threw, so yeah this is a good for them on a new start and things going their way. And if Chrysalis is the pairing for Jekyll them I support it
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I can see that
I think you got an interesting setting here.
Don't know if it is intended from you to get the story running, but many of his decisions and reasonings are coming out of the blue. Thinks old king was a tyrant, while never see him ruling. Reasons that he doesn't need any guard because there are not under pressure from outside forces, but where does he know that from? There wasn't any exchange of information before that. And so on.
Also he doesn't seem to think about anyone just using him for their own gain. That is one of the main problems of being a ruler.
Anyway, looking forward to the fun times when Cely und Luny visit him.
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Indeed
I like the setup this story has. However I think a look into his thinking process would be good for the character.
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This comment already made good points I want to make too.
For example allowing the changings to take or feed of some of his emotions is a decision I would like an explanation or reason for. Does he think because of his poweres nothing can really hurt him?, ignoring that Sombra damaged his arm.
Does he trust their word blindly that it is not harmful?
Why does he not immediately ask why they were rejected, does he plan on gaining their trust first, does he want to deceive them?Has he forgotten?
Sure some of that can be addressed in the next few chapters but I would like to understand him better.
What does he think before he makes decisions? Does he struggle with making them?
Is he analysing everything or does he go with his gut feeling?
This would probably make the story a little longer but you dont have to explain everything if you dont want. A few secrets are good to keep people interested and theorize about why things happen the way they do, but too many make a story hard to follow. At least some hints on how Jekyll thinks would be good, I believe.
Thanks for reading my TedTalkTM
well then Xenomorphs...mmh
So far so good
Ppppht
i like so far
She a slut
now to see if the elements accidently cause an international inccodint
so exciting and you leave it to another chapter :(
what's going on with shining armor and its gender?
guard captain bashing detected he is completely useless anyway
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I know!
And now we wait to see who messes up the relations with Crystal Kingdom first, because dEsTiNy, hArMoNy or something, i guess...
Well this should be interesting with the talks and nice choice of armor, wonder what the weapons of the Crystal Kingdom look like and how long it will be until firearms come into play
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Agreed and he mostly likely only became captain cause his sister was Celestia’s student and was date her niece
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A 50/50 chance they will or Shinging will cause it
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could be cadence as she might see her cutie mark as a right to rule them
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That to so it’s three possible ways for this to go down hill, but either way the people of the Krystal Kingdom likes their new king and don’t want anyone else screwing things up for them
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Right of conquest. Sombra had driven off Celestia, Luna(maybe, not sure if she was banished before this), AND Cadence. Jekyll had defeated Sombra, who defeated the aforementioned ponies, so HE is the rightful rule.
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if that was a thing that the princesses agreed on then quite a few of the villens would qualify as rightfull rulers to equestria
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Might makes right/Bigger army diplomacy. The various societies within the MLP world are FEUDAL as far as I am aware, therefor there are no constitutions or charters to grant rights to citizens or dictate what a ruler/rulers can and can't do.
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i dident understand that entirly but i think i understood it as what the leader said goes? is that right?
that would explane why celestia was able to improsion her sister and not have it end in the country falling apart.
I like the premise, setup, and potential political disasters coming up
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That said, I am seeing a red flag here. Character bias. That's not to say everyone isn't entitled to liking/disliking characters of their choosing. There can even be some fun stories come out of it. The problem is when an author gets too heavy handed. The added insults throughout the narrative, the OOC writing for the hated character and those around him trying to compensate for the forced plot. It usually ends up dragging the story down and frustrating the audience when it devolves into text that starts to read as "I hate x character. Character x should die. I hate x character" over and over again, drowning out other plot developments. My advice? If you don't like him and/or need to see him fail, have him fail in one big moment in character and have him have to struggle through to correct things later. Ex. have him do something reckless trying to be heroic after that business with the wedding and have to be bailed by the others or do something to make up for it.
Show him failing if you like, just don't let the fails eclipse your best features in the story. That's my take on it at least
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Yup
So far enjoying it hope to see more soon!
loving the story, hope there is more to come.
I see what you did there. And with all 40k references so far, when you bringing out the lazguns?
Holy crap! I just caught up and went to favorite...
BAM! New chapter.
if your going to switch perspectives can you tell us by writing something like "Chrys POV". it will make it so much easier to read than read half the chapter then realizing I'm reading it as the wrong character then reread the section again so I can understand it.
That's what she said
not judging but why do you hate Shining? (also I hate him as well). that would be fucking hilarious if you can get her stuck in the changeling warrior's barracks.
Doitdoitdoitdoitdoit!
if you are going to have something happen to shining then you might consider haveing it be because of cadence as that could help shake twilights faith in cadence