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GenerousGhibli


Alas, I am a very peculiar pansexual strawberry with a particularly practical skill for painting purple stuff.

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Sunset Shimmer meets Sunset Shimmer. Sunset Shimmer is very confused, but Sunset Shimmer seems to have the situation under control. Sunset Shimmer is also kind of attracted to Sunset Shimmer. Sunset Shimmer thinks she’s pretty okay with that.

Entry for the Changing Seasons Contest

Just a heads up, this is straight AU, but it's set in the EGU.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

Nice story, Sunset and Sunset make a great couple. It was fast, but for once, I didn't mind, it didn't make it any less enjoyable.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, the pacing could definitely be better. I was kind of in a rush. I finished this like, two hours before the contest deadline. I'm not gonna lie, it was rough.

I've actually always wanted to write Suncest, but I never really got motivated to do so. It's not something you see much of, and that's kind of a shame.

Cute it was nice having human sunsets point of view loved it

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I'm glad you like it! I thought it would be a nice touch. The original plan was to have it swap between the two, but it didn't feel right.

Interesting. The TFH was a bit odd but I like the logic behind the attraction.

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Yeah, it's definitely wierd. But I felt like I should come up with something as original as possible, and I think I did.

I'm glad you liked the reason for attraction. So often I see people writing fluffy LAFS style romance stories, but rarely are they initiated by legit physical attraction. I also had to think of something REALLY unique to prompt said attraction, as most people just look at themselves without feeling any attraction.

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Yeah. Either narcissism isn't a common trait or few are willing to admit to it.

La storia era fantastica! Amavo lo sviluppo del personaggio e il modo in cui si è passati tra le scene! La tua descrizione mi ha fatto felice e spero che fai bene! Assicurarsi di non mettere la salsa nella biancheria!

Comment posted by GenerousGhibli deleted Sep 19th, 2017

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[Google translated]
Grazie! Sono molto contento di aver goduto la mia storia! Dirò che la tua ultima linea mi confonde notevolmente. Ma sono contento che ti ho fatto sorridere! Se ti attacchi per un po ', sto pensando di fare uno stoppino più lungo dal concetto.

Inoltre, spero che Google tradisca non butcher la traduzione troppo male. Non parlo italiano.

That was ... weird, but in a good way. Kinda want to see more of Task Force Harmony now. And everyone else's reactions to Suncest. Especially their families. (Like what happens when both Sunset's parents meet at the wedding?)

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I'm glad you liked it! I did work really hard on it.

It's a distinct possibility that you will see more of it, but I've got a few more things I'm working on at the moment. I am really fond of the idea, and I have it tucked away for future use. If you'd like to see more like this, it might pay off to follow me.

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I heard Sunset Shimmer is ripped. I heard she has a six-pack. :V

That was crazy. Maybe went a little too long at the end, but a longer exploration of the concepts you've developed here wouldn't be amiss!

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I'm glad you liked it! I would love to expand the concept out more, but real life is a thing. Beyond that, I have other projects that need to be finished up before I can start a new one. I am setting up an outline for it, though... So maybe sometime in the next year or so.

Also, yeah... I can see where it might go on a tad bit too long. Oh well. Thank you so much for the feedback!

I'd love to see a full story about this.

And to be honest... I'm playing a changeling in a Role Play, and somehow made a demon fall in love with herself. So this obviously brought that to mind, as well as gave me a cool idea.

Keep up the good work.

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Both sentences translated (back, in Generous Ghibli's case,) to english, using google translate, anyone who wants to fix up the translation feel free, there are quite a few places where google translate may have translated it to the wrong word, like "Make sure you don't put the sauce in the laundry," could also be translated to "Make sure you don't get a dressing in the clothes!"

Dragonrim:

The story was great! I loved the character development and the way it went between scenes! Your description made me happy and I hope you do well! Make sure you don't put the sauce in the laundry!

GenerousGhibli:

Thank you! I am very happy that I enjoyed my story! I will say that your last line confuses me considerably. But I'm glad I made you smile! If you stick for a while, I'm thinking of making a longer wick from the concept.

Also, I hope Google cheats on it won't butch the translation too badly. I do not speak Italian.

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