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A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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With her gem broken and her mind-controlling powers destroyed, Adagio uses one of her few remaining skills: working with raw fish in a sushi restaurant.

Sunset works there too...and learns just how much Adagio has lost.


AU Or Not?

This is one of those stories that might or might not require an alternate universe. The main difference is, in canon EqG we don't see Sunset and Adagio interacting this much. But this story COULD have happened offscreen between other events, so it's hard to say. IF this story is squeezed into the canon world, Adagio and Sunset could have gone through a big, messy breakup before "Equestria Girls: Sunset's Backstage Pass."
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Prereader Credits

TheSmokingGuy preread. Short-tale preread portions of this story too.

Contests?

An entry in the 2021 November/December Sunset Shimmer x Adagio Dazzle (Sundagio) contest.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/215660/sunset-shimmer-x-eg-villains-shippers-group-competitions/thread/484182/adagio-x-sunset-competition-deadline-extension

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Comments ( 5 )

did you really have to do that at the end? ._.

So umm Adagio is dying or beginning to age after her crystal broke?

Also this was a really great entry!

Aww that was cute! Kind of a sad ending though

That was so beautifully done. The genuine way you make them bond was great. And dang that ending. As someone who tells their significant other in a daily basis they aren't allowed to die, just that idea of that moment. Knowing how much they care for each other, how do you tell a previously immortal person they are going to die? I'd honestly read a follow up that explores that idea.

"I'm swimming!" Adagio said. "I'm swimming! Like a disgusting land creature does it, but it's better than just drowning!"

That's good, I guess... :unsuresweetie:

Fluttershy put her hands over her face and ran away sobbing.

Good going Adagio. :ajbemused:

Adagio lifted her face. "Not just them, silly. You." She kissed Sunset on the lips.

https://m.

Twilight took a deep breath. "Adagio's gem is broken. She's always had it, since before she was hatched. In her siren seahorse form, it's a part of her body. If the mirror had turned her into a siren whose gem is broken..maybe she would have died? I suppose this was the only way the mirror could keep her alive."

Sure explains why she's still a human. :fluttershysad:

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