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Open for Art Commissions. I write gay romantic comedies with ponies now. Get off my back, MOM.

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Inspired by Mary Shelley's Frankenstein.

Than why does the name imply this is based off of Bram Stoker's Dracula?

Looks promising I hope there will be lots of cruel pet playing and enslavement installed for Sombra's return with Flash on his side, at least it already sounds hilarious. I wonder what was the thing between Shining and Flash if Shining was already married with Cadance, from the look of it the Guard didn't like his close 'friendship' With Shining in the first place. Also are you the artist for the cover art?

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Shining married Cadance after Sombra's defeat.

And yes! I am the cover artist.

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here is some of my work.

11044700 the same reason Star Wars is called that even though the stars don’t fight each other

Facial hair on Flash is always an improvement, diggin the cover Otter

I can't wait to read this! :D

Sombra sneered. “Confident as ever I see. Pity that I have to kill you as your egoism is rather attractive.”

“I hardly think my ego can even compare to a tacky vampire.” Shining laughed. “Where did you even get that cape from? Your ancestors from a thousand years ago? That just screams overcompensating.”

“It is cashmere and you will respect the regality of the cape,” Sombra snapped.

“I will happily show it the respect it deserves as I make love to my partner with it laid over your ashes.”

as a fan of Sombra's cape i love this exchange

An orange pegasus with a swept back blue mane and matching chinstrap beard strode towards Shining. He slung his lightning bolt shaped five string lyre over his back and brought Shining in close to him.

They kissed. Deeply.

hell yeah!

“Thanks, Flash. I always feel better when you tend to me.”

Flash’s face flushed. “Anything for you, Shining.”

aww! an adorable example of the bruiser/healer relationship? i don't play video games!

Shining’s grin turned lecherous as he leaned in closer to Flash. “Gladly, Love. you know I could never say no to those flanks.”

Before Flash could reply, a red arcane bolt of magic streaked between them and blasted the nearby wall. They both turned to face the furious form of Sombra standing who had a look of disgust on his face.

“Are you two seriously flirting in the middle of a life or death battle?” He stomped the floor underneath him, cracking it. “I am genuinely offended that you see fit to make out instead of focusing on me.”

hahaha, yeah! flirting with your partner in the middle of a battle really is disrespectful to the villain's threateningness. but i imagine it just makes said flirting way more fun and hot!

Shining smirked. “I’m a holy warrior indeed, but the only hole-”

“I already see where that statement is going and I’m having none of it.”

aww, c'mon! Sombra is no fun!

Sombra quirked an eyebrow. “Purely based on the potential to further embarrass you, does the barbaric idiot call his dick that too?”

“What? No I-”

“He does,” Flash answered confidently. “He takes me every night while calling out the name of his glorious blade.”

“Flash, why?” Shining whined.

Sombra, for his part, released gales of unbridled laughter.

Flash tilted his head to one side as he pulled the strings from his lyre with his wings and let them fall in a bundle on the floor around him. “Why not? I think it's super hot.”

“Yeah, but don’t tell that to our mortal enemies!” Shining whined as he formed a spiked bulwark shield of magic next to him.

ahaha aww! love the contrast between Flash and Shining's attitudes here, as well as Flash's rightful shamelessness.

“I will not be caught off guard again, you insolent horn dog.”

Flash wound back his lyre. “How do you know Shining’s pet name for me?”

hahaha gottem!

“That it does, Love. Now come here.” Shining used his magic to pull Flash closer to him. “I have a threat to Sombra to make good on.”

They both kissed as they revelled in their victory.

hehehe nice!

Her marriage to Shining Armour.

Flash’s ex-coltfriend.

oof!

They had been staying at an inn in some sleepy town Flash could barely remember the name of a mere three nights before their confrontation with Sombra when Shining had told him that. He had held Flash close to him by the roaring hearth and asked him to sing them both to sleep.

He had never felt so loved and safe before.

Now, it was just another bitter memory.

auauaugh way to twist the knife of an already heartbreaking scenario!

Once the guard was out of sight, Flash stood back up. Though distraught over how pitiful his reputation apparently was, at least he now knew why his compatriots despised him.

Even if he couldn’t understand why Princess Cadance had said those things about him.

ooh, i really can't either, so i am hoping this will be revealed later! and oof, poor Flash, he is getting absolutely no breaks here!

Panic gripped his heart as he spun around to see the candlesticks burst into bright red flame. The light illuminated the crystal carvings revealing scenes of dismembered ponies and sexual debauchery.

oh wow, that is very, very ominous!

Flash’s eyes widened in recognition.

“No, it can’t be,” he whispered. “We killed you.”

The monster hovered before Flash, a devilish smirk upon his lips.

“Oh, how positively delightful,” Sombra said. “The pegasus with the fine set of flanks has come to visit my deceasement.”

well, quite the cliffhanger to leave us on!


as always, your banter is top-notch and the loneliness and awful luck of your Flash is all-encompassing. Sombra is such a deliciously arrogant villain, and there are so many fascinating pieces you've set up here, chiefly whatever is going on with Cadance and Shining. so mysterious, with so many dramatic possibilities! really looking forward to this story continuing!

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