Yickslurbertfest Fuckfest!

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Shrinky Frod

Shrinky Frod #1 · March 15th · 1 · · Epilogue ·

Half a doz-

*cues up the trumpet for taps later*

Eldritchcoomer

Eldritchcoomer #2 · March 15th · 1 · · Prologue ·

Not a fan of the into, the author is making it sound like their relationship is something ethereal or unheard of before and kinda taboo. Which is not a good start or a good image you'd want to give your fic, especially since this would interest polycule readers.
My advice in the future drop the poly relationship is weird and never heard of speal, it's not cool or good writing.

But hopefully that's just a weird thing for the first chapter, if this nonsense persists onwards I'll drop the fic.

PegPony

PegPony #3 · March 15th · · · Prologue ·

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You're right, I didn't take that into consideration and that's something I need to avoid in future, hopefully the rest of the fic doesn't disappoint.

Herald of Opera