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I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.

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However, the agreement involves them having to please one dragon in particular, Spike.

Wouldn't it make more sense to make it a dragon who hasn't lived with ponies his whole life?

11 months later 9 half-dragon/half-pony foals are born.

Good story.

What if lifemating was involve in order to save her?

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Well the idea is that Dragon Lord Torch wants to know that even if a dragon has chosen to live in pony society, that he still has all the rights a dragon would have in the dragon lands, which is why Torch wants Spike to have multiple sexual partners, it's an integral part of their culture.

10718299
Not sure what you mean here.

10718645
I intend to! I know I'm not a perfect writer, but as long as some people are enjoying it, then I don't particularly mind.

10718214
Thanks! the dragon-pony thing might happen as an epilogue if enough people want it, but for now this story is finished :)

10718767
Just this: arranged marriages are the worst.

10719021
I agree, though I'm not exactly sure how it is relevant. I get that there is a similarity in that the princesses all agreed to sacrifice their virginity in order to keep peace between nations and that it's rather unfair, but other than that I'm not getting your point. I'm sorry, but I don't understand.

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Ember and Smolder get along with Spike to a point that they rather be with him than an arranged marriage, Ocellus would want to be with Spike than be chosen to be picked as a breeding chamber, Princess Skystar would rather choose Spike than be arranged with some unknown, or Gabby want Spike as a forever-mate than paired in some sort of ritual.

Examples of somewhat.

10718768
Critics make the artist
Best tough love there is

Ok, this story is starting really good with Dragon Lord Torch being sucked off by 2 dragonesses infront of Celestia, Luna and Cadence!

10917393
Thanks! It seemed appropriate.

10917658
It would be interesting to see images of those two dragonesses that are servicing Torch, because the first thing i though was "Those are Aloe and Lotus as dragonesses, arent they?? It would be creepy if the blue one turn out to his daughter Ember..."

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You are correct! The dragon girls servicing Torch are indeed just Aloe and Lotus but as dragon girls. Ember is definitely not one of them, Torch even states that she is a lesbian, so even if she were OK with incest, it's not likely she'd wanna get it on with her dad.

i liked the story, the chapters were a bit short but that worked in its favor due to so many stories being so drawn out and this story while short didn't feel super rushed like alot of short stories. a sequel would be nice but if you can't its fine, and to the down voters 'yall need to pull the sticks out of your butts' , i agree this wasn't perfect but nothing ever is and i feel the amount of downvotes on this should be nowhere near even half the upvotes but thats just my opinion and everyone is entitled to there opinion even the haters of the world, to each their own. best regards, darkbroney666

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Wow, thank you for such positive feedback! A sequel is not out of the question, are you formally requesting one?

10937966
a sequel would be nice so yes i guess i am formally requesting one.

10937319
Well second question is who is Ember's girlfriend? Not too many dragon girls to date with, even if Ember's the Dragon Lord...

10938517
Good question! In this continuity I don't imagine that Ember has a girlfriend yet.

10938405
Excellent! Before I add it to my "to do" list, do you have any ideas or specifics for what you'd like to see in a sequel to this story?

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kinda, it would depend on how long it would be for example if it will be longer than this one then i think it would be interesting and funny if cadence and luna got pregnant and some drama was stirred like shining armor feeling betrayed or maybe celestia geting jealous that she was the only one that didn't get nocked up. however if it will be about the same length then maybe do something like having torch come congratulate spike, and maybe have it expand on why he wanted spike to have the best of the best as mates aka royalty, maybe it turns out that spike is the son of a long dead friend of torch

Would be funny if all the girls wound up pregnant from this.

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Not in this one! The sequel however.........

Spike's cocks were enormous, beyond huge, so big that they were intimidating. How could a dragon so small have dicks so large? They were completely out of proportion and borderline preposterous, how was he going to wield those things? How were the princesses going to take them?!

Reminds me of a certain R34 drawing... Can't remember the character, but the caption will always make me chuckle. "No longer so lil'..."

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