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Lurks-no-More


Hi! I'm Lurks-no-More: a pony writer, RPG player, SF and fantasy fan, and a general nerd. I hope you enjoy my stories!

Comments ( 9 )

That title is a horrible pun and you should be proud.

Well, when are you gonna do something for Smolcellus or Gallstream~?

:twilightsheepish: PAN CAKE!
:moustache: No that's sandbar
:duck: A sand cake
:moustache: So that's how they iron & press your designs
:raritywink: Come Spike we have our own things to do
:moustache: Smashing my Lady
:facehoof:

This was amazing. Love the Yonbar in this and can see this happening.

This was a nice and sexy Yonabar smut story. I hope there’s more Yonabar sex soon and then some, like Sandbar ramming Yona doggystyle or the two of them 69-ing each other. I’d also like to see how you might handle a Gallustream smut shot or a Smolcellus porno. Maybe a Young Six anthro smut anthology to go with it?

finally thanks someone from a picture of yona anthrop and good episode I really liked it

First of all, thank you to everyone for your reads, faves, upvotes, and especially comments. :yay:

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My original, ambitious plan was to have this as a three-part story, indeed with Gallus and Silverstream in the next part, and culminating with Ocellus and Smolder. However, real life intruded as it is wont to do, I ran out of time and inspiration, and in the end only the first part got written.

However, I have not given up on the possibility of doing those as sequels to this story... I have some ideas about the various non-pony species I'd like to play with, and of course write some more Student Six clop.

Always thought one of them would be in Hypersexual Mode.

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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Nice job of keeping them in character.
-Exposition/summary opening.
-Could use a bit more afterglow & foreplay. Maybe also more focus on undressing?
-For the readers out there, if you like your girls big and hairy, this one's for you!

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 80/100
Allure: 60/100
Enticement: 75/100
Immersion: 89/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 394/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.

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