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Maud Pie has always been a peculiar kind of mare. More interested in rocks than ponies. But when she tells her younger sister, Pinkie Pie, that she has found a special somebody. Naturally, the pinkie mare demands up and down that her older sister tell her who he is. But the stoic mare being rather secretive only drives a more and more curious obsession in Pinkie’s mind.

This is part of my 1k challenge.

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Ew... just...ew

Boulder must be dying right now. :rainbowlaugh:

An interesting idea.
I could see this happening.

I liked it.

Bravo! :rainbowlaugh:

They're meant for each other.

ITS TOM

Ah, don't feel too bad Boulder. Maybe you could try to win over Rarity, after all Tom is no longer around to steal her heart. :rainbowlaugh:

I fucking loved this story!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile::raritywink::raritystarry::heart::rainbowlaugh:


It was also hilarious!

This is clearly a match made in heaven! Or maybe a match even the Earth demands? I got nothing... :fluttershysad:

Still this was a great story. I had a feeling, but it was still a blast to read. I think they are meant to be!!! I ship it!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Well, I have a new OTP.

I wonder what Rarity will think when she hears that somepony's been dating Tom. :pinkiegasp:

Somerock.

New headcanon.

Honestly this was not the grammar train wreak I usually see from your work Don-kun. Lol, color me impressed. :rainbowlaugh: Maybe you should rush all your stories this way.

Literally the only surprising thing about this pairing is that it took this long to surface.

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I believe so

Tom's never been very sedimental. In fact, he's usually downright stony!

He may be a bit igneous of pony courtship, but I'm sure he'll learn on the way.

At least we know he's dependable. He'll pull through for Maud, come shale or high-water.

...That's all I've got.

Damn it, now I need to read this, because of the whole concept... that and the shit ton of rock puns in the comments

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I hope you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

:fluttercry: That's so romantic... :rainbowlaugh:

Absolutely beautiful. The perfect relationship. :twilightsmile:
Truly this is Shakespearean-level of literature in drama itself. :eeyup::eeyup:
I APPLAUD YOU!
*Claps rigorously*

4098393 YOU DON'T KNOW LOVE LIKE MAUD AND TOM!!

Saw that coming a mile away. :rainbowlaugh:

"He's my special somerock."

:rainbowlaugh:
Funny short little story. Have a :moustache: and a
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4100414 Sorry...I just got the most disgusting image of a pony having sex with a rock.

4101404 Well, you can say that it will rock, hard!

I truly, sincerely hoped that there was some story beyond the (poorly hidden) twist, but deep down I knew that was not the case.
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So I'm assuming you didn't like it

4100414 Thanks for ruining it :raritydespair:

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What did you honestly expect? The word count an complete on this story already let you know it was a short and sweet fanfic.

Honestly, people in fimfic are too spoiled with long stories and chapters.

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No no I can agree with meme-asaurus. The story was short and didn't have the kick I usually deliver in my stories :fluttercry:
but regardless I am happy with this story. It is not meant to make you think. It is a short, humble story. And I am thankful so many have enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:

Sequel: Maud vs Rarity

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As much as I'd love to, it would end like this:

:rainbowlaugh:

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Well...

Lets just hope she doesn't use Tom for the nuke strike

4102711 Then why are reading the comment first?

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Did you write this in under four hours as well?

Overall... what? There's absolutely nothing in these paragraphs. Story feels like a parody... a badly paced parody that just rushes through everything. The joke's been revealed since the start of the story, so it's not that.

This idea also feels like missed potential. You were just racing to put your stamp on the idea, won't you? I mean, just reading this, I could already imagine a silly love triangle between Boulder, Tom and Maud that'd make a much more interesting story.

...At least the coverart's okay though.

Eh. My head canon still says that Tom ended up on the Pie rock farm, where he serves as a role model for the little rocks.

Also I don't think Rainbow Dash would say "I find it rather suspicious"

:facehoof: oh wow but still a nice fic 8/10 mustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I approve of this.

Heck, Boulder could be my step stone now.

Truly, undoubtably, undeniably, absolutely brilliant......
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

This is my new OTP.

Yes, someone finally wrote a fic shipping these two! Woo hoo! :D
Thank you good sir!

Okay, I got to give you points. It's really hard to capture Tom's sense of humor but you managed to pull it off nicely. On a less insane note, it was a very nice little story, I kind of guessed that it would be Tom, but it was still a fun ride.

"OHMYGOSH!" Pinkie was darting back and forth. "SomaybeMaudismeetingabadpony....mmmmmmoppfhfhfmfhfmfmm"

Just go back here, it looks like this.

easiily

wat.

This was hilarious! XD :rainbowlaugh:

4098416 I don't know. He could use a father figure in his life.

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