I am but a humble weaver of words hoping to expand the loom of understanding. What are we but strings in a greater fabric?
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Maud follows a pattern distinct from the rest of the ponies in Equestria: in different ways all of the Pie clan does. What happens though when she meets Cheese Sandwich, a pony with a vitality of spirit she’s all too familiar with? Is it love?
Maud Pie x Cheese Sandwich! Rock out!
A possibly miniseries, dependent on readership.
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I absolutely love this, and that is coming from a full on CheesePie shipper.
You caught Maud's personality perfectly in my opinion and her inner thoughts made me smile. And Cheese Sandwich always makes me smile no matter what, but his story made me sad (which is a good thing). Please continue this! I'll be looking forward to it eagerly. 
And I just have to point out that there were a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Sorry, it's just my OCD.
I like this.
You promise to continue...
Faved!
Moar.
Lovely! Both characters deserve more attention.
Now this was interesting, I loved it. You really captured Maud's personality, and it almost felt real.I could picture most of what you wrote clearly in my mind. I hope you'll update it, I'd love to know what happens next
I really liked how you showed the contrast between Maud and Cheese Sandwich. The way you portray the characters is very realistic and interesting.
Very well written and I look forward to reading more!
Nice. Liked and faved. I'd like to see where this goes and one has to appreciate a good joke. Plus you gave cheese a kind of sad clown thing so there's that.
Liked and most definitely faved. Please continue.
this is worth 4
Liked it, Loved it, Faved it
More please! It is so funny, I was literally thinking of shipping Maud and Cheese, and I check out fimfiction, and here is your story!
You are awesome! It's like you read my MIND!
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Huzzah it is approved. I Christian this good ship Maud x Cheese! Production on following chapters shall begin! 
Such a public outcry warms my heart!
I saw some other person ship Maud and Cheese. Your versions are miles apart. I like yours the best though. It's alot more sublte and better writen. This deserves more attention.
Sir, I would love for you to continue this. My Sediments Exactly is a good read, but I never thought I'd see Cheese Sandwich and Maud Pie shipped together, even if the former is a male Pinkie Pie
This ship works!
Me likey.
what?
Missed an 'a' there, "Instead she saw a brown maned pony..."
...too many 'you's'? :P
either remove 'flashed' or 'gave'. :3
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anyway, this is turning out great.
can't wait for more~
This is a bloody good start, mate. I'll be looking forward to the future chapters.
Go CheesePie, woohoo
As usual, well done. :) though i can't say I'm a fan of the last pun A lil too upbeat for her, dare I say.
Up there as one of the most brilliant sentences ever.
Can't wait for more! What a shipping!
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.......... they need to amke an episode where maud meeets cheese sandwhich.
Really looking forward for more! More! MOAR!. . . . . . . . .
ok, sorry
Please more ... [pleeeeeeeeeeeese
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this is so flipping awesomely amazingly GOOD!!!!!!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Delightful read!
Yes. More, please.
I love this story.
Pinkie sense and Guard Armor explained? Headcanon accepted!
Also, I see what's going on as far as the ending
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We've been using that guard armor explanation for years. Accept it sooner!
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Blue!! :)
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Oh yes we have
This is pretty good so far.
I feel that Cheese is too simular to Pinkie for a relationship to work between them, but I never considered shipping him with Maud.
A rock joke? SERIOUSLY?!?
MORE!! Please?
this is good make more chapters!!
I have added this story to my new recommendation group here.
Chapter 2 was brilliant, and a great way to continue the story. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes you should watch out for, but for the most part I'm absolutely loving this story. Keep up the great work, look forward to chapter 3.
we need more of this, love the ship too, its almost like if Pinkie and Big Mac got together, only gender swapped and the silent one likes apples instead of rocks... actually, I wonder if there is a good Pinkie Mac on this site? i'm gonna have to look now
I told this to my much younger cousin, who was into all of that swag stuff, and he didn't get it.
Then again, my cousins are the weirdest kids you'll ever meet, and are pretty boring half the time
Simon says write more.
So does this Twilight face:
I just can't get over Maud's last lien.
I love how they've known each other for, like, half a day, and Maud has already professed her feelings.
Can't wait for more!