When something terrible happens to Gummy on the rockfarm, Pinkie Pie just wasn't the same. It's up to her dull older sister, Maud to help her get up on her hooves. Will this unenthusiastic mare be able to put a smile on her sister's face?
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Aww!
This is such a sweet, and sad, story!
Nope.
Nice story
4174213 Yeah it is sad and sweet
I'm very sad about the fact I had to finally give a dislike to some story... But that is what I felt was the right thing to do. That story i supposed to have way more feelings than this... What's supposed to feel like a tragedy, feels like a casual situation. Nopony in Ponyville, except fluttershy, gave a comment on Gummy's death or asked at least how it happened. I couldn't feel them really caring about Gummy.
You know--I kind of liked this! I thought it was nice that Maud went to all that trouble to try to cheer up her sister. I liked the way you brought in all her friends, too. The only off tones maybe were the way Gummy died. I know that in some ways, it's more powerful if it's Pinkie Pie's fault, but it's a bit sudden, and we've also seen Gummy eat stuff the size of himself.
And here's a teeny little thing: try putting an extra blank like between your paragraphs.
Anyway--sorry you're getting so many downvotes. It doesn't deserve that.
*cries, then smiles and laughs* I was sad about this, but also happy (I was happy at the end).
It's a very sweet story. But, I have one problem with it. This story has too many comedic moments to be tagged as just a sad story. For example, this: