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The Grimm Reaper


The Grimm Reaper or Mar (for short) is the writer of the 'Darkness Duology', 'Immortal', 'They Come at Night... Mostly!' and 'Only Bone Deep'. Among others.

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Twilight Sparkle, Magical student extraordinaire turned Alicorn Princess looks up into Luna's night sky every night, wondering if there is more to life than what she knows on Equis. Silently, she wishes for an answer to her burning desires. And the universe answers in the form of a Sith Lord.

Darth Sidious believed Starkiller to be a broken shadow of himself after he betrayed both his master and his allies alike, a broken shell, weaker than he could have been. But Little does he know that like Vader, technology didn't extinguish the flames of desire and purpose in him. Starkiller has biden his time, waiting for the right moment to strike against the Empire; now after finding himself in a strange new world untouched by the empire or the Preluding Clone Wars, he has discovered a race fully capable of fighting against the Empire, or at least the Emperor himself.

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You have my attention good sir.

As well as mine.... ill be watching you. FOREVER!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Oh man, this is epic! :derpytongue2: Hope you liked my story, cause I am definitely liking this one! You don't mind if I blog about this to spread the word about your story, do you?

Well, well, well what do we have here, a Star Wars fic?

You have already piqued my interest, sir. :moustache:

You have caught my attention. I see much potential in this story and hope to see that Starkiller won't be a TOTAL dick like Darth Vader was in All Hail the Dark Lord. Him having a "What the fuck is this shit?" attitude is perfectly fine, encouraged even. Now one thing I don't like is the whole Twilight/Luna thing since I just have never been able to see Twilight as a lesbian since she's one of my favorite characters, but that's only my personal opinion. Another issue is that his arrival seems a tad rushed and unexplained. His ship is damaged before it enters the atmosphere but you don't explain why. Perhaps in the next chapter you could have a flashback to what brought him to crash on Equis. Later in the story you might could tell the story from Darth Sidious's point of view, wondering where Starkiller went and eventually investigating. Oh and one last thing. Make sure Starkiller gets bucked by an over protective Applejack at least once. :rainbowlaugh: If you need any more advice on this story, please feel free to ask.

The blunt force of the sudden halt knocked Starkiller out cod and he was left with his memories, more specifically the image of the Rogue Shadow's Prototype crashing through the room towards him.

Cod should be cold.

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: MOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :D

I am very displeased with Star Killer's actions... I should of killed the fierfek...

2864810 Not at all. I've been on the lookout for someone to do that. lol:twilightsmile:

I'll fav it and in return all i can ask is... Please don't make me regret it. :fluttershyouch:

(By regret I mean Not Updating... Or updating at a reasonable speed :P)
(Reasonable being... at least every 1-2 weeks maybe? :duck:)

I'm liking this... :rainbowkiss:

-Kiryu :moustache:

A story with my favorite star wars character with him wearing my favorite suite that you unlock after you beat the game!?! YES

He is…quite kind, for a Sith.

Vould you like a proofreader?

woooh! I like where your heading. he isn't completely ruthless and he isn't a bitch, so hoorah for middle ground!

Not bad...you present the alternate ending version of Force unleashed in a mot curious fashion.
I cannot help but wonder how you would write a fic of the Starkiller clone arriving in Equestria.

Not bad!
I woul think about perhaps expanding on the earlier scenes in this chapter, because it does indeed seem a bit rushed. Other than that, well done!

2879049 Might do a spinoff for that if people want it enough.

2879049 Star Wars the force unleashed 2 was baaaaddd.

2879542 graphics were good though, lol.

Awesome, love the story so far, update soon :pinkiehappy::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

2879551 Writing the next Chap as I speak.

2879542 Absolutely, but I loved the character development of the Starkiller clone.

2879662 I'd love to see a fic where the Dark Apprentice clone ends up in Equestria.

awesome XD update soon

Oh my god...It is totally true, too..Poor Starkiller.

Excelent job, my good sir. Have a mooooustache:moustache:

Was it necessary for the use of the Applejack emoticon?

"Sorry, Fluttershy, was something the matter?" Twilight asked, unable to place the importance of Equestria over Fluttershy's need to assert herself from time to time.

Oh my god :rainbowlaugh:

Also the AJ emoticon was hilarious for some reason. This fic has quite a unique style. I like it! :pinkiehappy:

PINKIE KNOWS ALL!

The force is strong with the pink one.

2884315 i bet it was pinkie pie he felt, not twilight :pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

2894633 Yeah...she's like Deadpool for kids.

OMG UPDATE PLEASE!

Oooh, is that that chick who was sent to kill Starkiller?

2984538 Doing a fight scene right now.

Which white haired fucker?
Kadaj, Loz or Yazoo?

2984770 the first one i think. has that Sephiroth complex.

2984834 They al had the Sephiroth complex. Kadaj was just the one to successfully act upon it.

Let me simplify this a little. Did the guy you referrenced have a parallel bladed katana, a pistol with a blade along the top of the barrel or a weird electrical melee weapon on top of his left hand?

...On that note, has anyone else noticed that the FF villains are ususally left-handed while the heroes are right-handed?

2984882 ...Holy fuck. Until you said that, I don't think I've ever noticed...

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