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Yin or Yang


Taking a permanent break.

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Trixie had just finished one of her best shows, but the Appleoosa heat has made her exhausted. She goes to a bar to order a drink and soon meets Braeburn. Trixie falls for Braeburn, but will she be able to even form a friendship with him, let alone a romantic one?

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Since you asked for feedback, here it is. There were a couple of moments of repetition. Also, about half of that last paragraph was unnecessary given the One-Shot nature of this story. But still, more than worthy of an up-vote, wouldn't mind seeing this as a full fledged TrixiexBraeburn fic, if you had the time.

4502421 Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to be a little more careful in examining how my words fit the story.

Toby is amused........ You have serviced my craving hunger for literature, and for that I thank you...

but thanks never seems to last... does it?

>Wizard caps and cowboy hats.

Sounds better in my opinion.:twilightblush:

It was . . . decent. Earned my upvote, at least.

Odd pairing, but,
Sequel?

Dude from this I think you are a great romance writer and you seem very detailed In your writing so keep it up and please write a sequel

- Emerald Knight

fanny pack

Trixie confirmed as an 80's child, :trixieshiftright:

Nice story; wouldn't mind seeing more! :twilightsmile:

the cuteness levels are over...the top.( haha no dragon ball joke here. :rainbowlaugh:)

MAKE A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2::flutterrage::raritydespair::raritydespair::trixieshiftleft::moustache::facehoof:

Wow Braeburn. I never realized you were that... forward. :derpyderp2:

Personally I felt a lot more could have been done with this. (Like maybe showing the date?)

This begs for elaboration.

This was cute, I really want to see where this is going. Also this is pairing I haven't really heard much of, and would really like to see how far it can go.

I just found this story. I like this story. It cute, charming, and most importantly, complete.:pinkiehappy:

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