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Yin or Yang


Taking a permanent break.

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Up for adoption, please read the last chapter's author notes for more information.


Tirek had been defeated, and Equestria cheered, ready to return to their daily lives. The end, right?


If only it were that simple. Six months later, Ponyville has underwent a major transformation, and a group of young ponies are going to see just how much everything has changed, and will be put on the course of a grand adventure, as they discover the secrets of Equestria and that as bad as Tirek was, things can get much worse, physically and emotionally.

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Dropping this in my Read Later list

*totally hasn't finished s4 yet* :ajsleepy:

Cloudsdale because the city in the sky was deemed to dangerous to live, since over a thousand pegasi and griffons died when they lost their flight and over half a million were injured in some way

Sudden Fridge Horror realization :twilightoops:
Also, the whole Tiara-Silver Spoon dialogue seems kinda... forced in my opinion.

4507574 Thanks for the feedback. I'm still a novice, so I'll figure out how to write better implemented scenes with practice.

Minor nitpick.

You'd think that with those 3 running all over Ponyville all summer long, they would have NOTICED their school being remodelled at one point or another. :facehoof:

So not only does Scootaloo tempt fate, Apple Bloom lampshades that she's tempting fate. I'm hooked already.

I might as well start reading my watches now, built up about 120+

4511694 You'd be surprised at how much some people don't notice things.

I'm curious why ponies would willing be 'followers' (for lack of a better word) of Discord. Also, I'm kind of curious why the author stopped production on this work.

It's a shame that this was cancelled. It had a lot of potential as well. :pinkiesad2:

Dude, you had 191 views, 7 upvotes and no downvotes, and you cancel it? Fame isn't going to just come every time you update. You have to advertise it.

4572881
Or you catch someones eye. Or write porn. Or fluff.

But I'll see what I can do.

4572881 I'm not certain about that. Chances are, someone is going to refresh the home page and see your story pop up, and this site has nearly 1,000 to 2,000 people on it at any given time. I mean, I'm not a good author by any stretch of the imagination, but my story spiralled onwards and upwards, with over 30 favourites on my first two chapters. I guess it's a lucky draw thing. Thankfully, with Sir Hat's help, this story might continue.

Holy crud, it updated! Oh, darn. Another fic bites the dust. :fluttercry:

I just found this story today, but I'm upset that you've cancelled it. Please reconsider.

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