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You should really put incest as one of the fetishes.
and now she preggers
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Just added, thank you
*Said
I can't decide if this pun was deliberate or not.
The description is a bit off. She's not the first born but she is the oldest? Just a little thing but it bothers me.
7871957
Thank you for that, when I first started this, I thought Maud was the oldest. But when I looked into it, the order was Limestone, Maud, Pinkie, Marble. So i guess I forget to change the description, well it's corrected now.
7871989
Your welcome, good read aside from that.
if you do write a sequel I cannot wait this is the awesome story
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Up to the requester, or anyone else really.
Seemed a bit sudden the switch from being disgusted to "oh yeah I love the D".
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So thank you. 
Firstly. I never expected one of the Story Approvers to notice, let alone comment on any of my stories.
Secondly:
Basically she was disgusted but had grown to enjoy it, because the sexual pleasure stimulating her brain was more than she assumed it would be and it took her off guard. As well as my mention of her victorious smile; this was to imply more her "I love the D" dialogue during the sex was an act, or at least an exaggeration, to drive her father more and more towards her. Yes, she did enjoy the sex, and yes, she may do it again. But she didn't fully break and is not enslaved to her father's body. The mention of her being "marked" was more, she has never experienced anything this intense and despite holding out long enough to achieve her goal, she has still been afflicted in a way she can neither forget, nor reverse.
So I do understand if the transition between Limestone's "disgust" to "love" of the affair she had with her father seems rough or rushed and I do thank you for pointing it out. It will only allow me to know how to improve in my future work. So once again, thank you.
7885071
*Blowjob
Try 'sensation'.
*Then