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I write low quality fan fiction stuff.

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If this trend continues some pony is going to die the next day since it would be limestones turn

I don't mean to be rude, but can you get an editor or something? There's a lot of grammatical errors here. Plus, the writing could use improvement.

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Oh yeah I know my writing is abysmal. I try to edit stuff a few days after I write it, but I don't have anyone that can edit this stuff properly.

I can help you edit your stories if need be. Also, this is really good. Keep it up.

your going to give me a heart attack with all this hotness

pinkie will wise up eventually and see that being dominated is limestones fetish

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I wouldn't call it abysmal. I'm thoroughly enjoying it.

No Marble you've been helping me out a lot lately so I’m gonna replay you!

repay

She got Marble.

oh i cant wait for the moment pinkie finds out all this stuff and they all get jobs as escorts i think they are called

Pop it did, Pinkies cock started shooting potent futa cum all over Marbles stomach, that then leaked down to hr crotch and legs. Marble was still stunned when Pinkie said to her.

her

Maud didn't say anything as Pinkie started pushing in but she was in heaven, her ass felt amazing as pinkie started pushing her cock inside, and she braced her hands against the wall. Pinkie could only get around two inches in before the resistance was too much, but her tip felt amazing. Mauds cheeks were spread open and pinkie could see Mauds puffy ring being spread open by her cock, grabbing onto Mauds hips she slowly started thrusting her tip in and out. Pinkie watched as her cock went in and out, every movement caused her puffy ring to be dragged out, or be pushed in. Even with just a few inches in Maud’s ass felt amazing, as she thrust in Pinkie started to move her hands back, and grope her sisters ass while she fucked her.

I think a commas supposed to be there to separate the sentence and change the meaning.
with just a few inches in, Maud’s ass felt amazing

Ok, this is pretty sweet. Really like this fic and the descent into nymphos. Looking forward to more Maud.

This is really hot. Keep it going.

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Hey, thanks for pointing that out.

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Thanks again for pointing that out.

Update?

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I'm gonna come back and continue this pretty soon, I've got up to part 12 rough written down but I still need to edit them before I upload.

Hey, I've made a 48,000 word, six part series dumpster fire of a series. Those are some of the most fun to make. And it's got incest and futas as well, so you're not alone.👍:scootangel:

Part of me is hoping Pinkie impregnates one of her sisters. I'm not sure how I feel about Pinkie being a top in the relationship with her family, as least portrayed as such, but the sex is still hot.

It lives!

This is just fine, dude. It's exactly what it's meant to be.


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Part of me is hoping Pinkie impregnates one of her sisters

Me too, Journeyman. Me too.

More god plz More!!

A minor suggestion: perhaps some kind of name for the chapters, to find your favorite spots easier and... such? :)

I have a problem. This story has been dead for too long!

God, Pinkie has all her sisters broken into such nice obedient whores now. I love it.

Always adore seeing more of this, and it didn't disappoint. Excited to see what kinds of clients are in store to use the sexy sluts.

Heh. I still think about this one sometimes! It was hot.

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