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Claws And Hooves


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Making up for Wintersolider's Spikes Time with the Pie Sisters?
Well done

Very nice, love it.

I'd suggest getting an editor to look at this, some parts make me pause for a moment and reread the sentence to understand what I just read.

Apart from that, I'm intrigued.

Filled with missing words and grammatical errors

Hope you can write more chapters.

Nice work, Claws. Really surprised Marble is the mastermind of this--talk about the Line "its always the quiet ones"...Though I hope Spike can finish her time with Marble--she's as amorous and wild as Fluttershy (coincidently another quiet mare with an wild streak).

Great story wonderful job I am a little bit sad cuz I was trying to look into stories about cloudy quartz I thought this would be a good story about her :-( no Spike fucking milf

I would have really loved a fourth chapter of Spike actually dominating them.

The grammar in these stories is quite terrible with the tense of every scene flipping at random. If feels that the writer likely doesn't normally write/read english.

maldigo ni falta de entendimiento de ingles, casi no logro entender las referencias... aparte de eso la historia no esta mal...
I curse my lack of understanding of English, I can hardly understand the references... apart from that the story is not bad...

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