Im a brony & spike is best
Spike and the human Mane 7 are best friends and he helps them with everything no questions asked, one day the Principal asked them to stay the night at her place to watch over her son even though he can take care of himself.
They decided to make it a slumber party that ends with the girls giving him a special thank you gift for always helping and being there for them.
In this story, Spike is the same age as the human Main 7
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It was at this moment that everyone knew he had tempted Murphy
the lack of punctuation marks is hurtful...
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Yeah, this could do with some commas and such.
Come one, come all, and witness the apostrophe atrocity.
But no seriously you haven’t got an apostrophe on the word in the title that needs one and you do have one on the word that doesn’t need one. Sort that shit mate, more people will click after.
And we already have misplaced apostrophe's!
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Sorry for asking but what is a apostrophe?
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This symbol: '. It is used to denote ownership, or to indicate where part of a word is missing.
Thomas' shirt=The shirt belonging to Thomas.
"Ah'm so excited fer another meetin' of the CMC."
Here, it is being used to denote the 'g' of 'meeting' is missing.
It is the most misused piece of punctuation. The title of this story, when broken down, currently means 'Of Spike Girls'. The author meant 'Spike's Girls', or 'The girls belonging to Spike'.
Hope that helps!
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Very thank you
:3
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No problem.
(sets up a table) ok we know the drill here. Place your bets on who's gonna get a crack at spike first.
7 sexy teenage girls. A sleepover. Bikinis & swinsuits! Alone for the weekend with Spike! Giggity!
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5 bucks on Fluttershy!
MLPMekarm five bucks on Rainbow Dash
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got the bets. any more coming?
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5 bucks on a everygirl at once kiss
5 bucks on the Pinkie pie first time
7 bucks on AJ/RD at the same time
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put down for 10 on Twilight
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no u
Being nude for two days?!
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Got them guys.
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wow. lots of bets being made.
Seven pregnant girls, that is one of the things that can happen. Worse or best, that is for you to decide.
I know in this story he is his dad... but man, Discord is such a bro!
Damit Celestia alway ruining the fun
IF Spike was sterile then no worries.
I'm not sure about a party, but being naked in bed with the girls is guarantee, Tia. Still can't believe it took her that long to realize her mistake.
Also, Pinkie is sly little devil, doing jumping jacks naked just for Spike
Can you do another Spike x CMC x DT x SS fic?
While Spike is having fun with his 7 dirty little secrets, Discord is having fun with his 2 beauties
So.............. who wins the bet???
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Did anyone bet for Rarity, cuz Spike said...
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no..... no one did................
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Oh...... *takes back the 5 bucks & runs*
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HEY!!!! GET BACK HERE!!!!! (chases after)
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Never!!!
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GIVE BACK THE MONEY!!! (picks up speed)
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No one won, so its my money again! *runs faster*
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It's the house's money if no one wins!!! (picks up more speed) it's a betting law!!!
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Its a stupid law!
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is not!!!
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It is!
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is not!!! also the house takes 5% of all winning bets!!! that's also a betting law so that we can make a profit to get better stuff to hold bets!!!
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Oh fine, you big baby, here! *throws the money back* But next time, it will be mine again!
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yay!!
What take my mony
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I haven't read the next chapters so, I'll put 15 bits on AJ first and 5 bits on Rarity last.
Since I got into this late, and the betting pool was technically already over, I'm just going to *mad dash out the door*
There was an attempt. I have some very morbid curiosity about how awful this is just from that title alone.
Well, that's enough Fimfiction for one day. Does your word processor not have spellcheck, or do you ignore it because you think that computers are the devil and refuse to trust them?
Either way, holy hell on a handbasket you really need to focus more on proofreading and editing.
Home alone with 7 hot girls lucky asshole
She glared and gritted her teeth realizing what could happen, then called her house phone to tell her son that he better not throw no house parties or be in bed naked with any of the girls. Well to late.
Never say the phrase, Spike!
Tis Cursed!