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Wildcard25


I used to question the MLP FiM show, but one episode and I got hooked on it. See my Fanfiction account ChaosMagemon for more than just MLP fics. Joined the Herd Nov 5, 2011

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Join Spike Cynder as he starts high school in a new city. At Canterlot high he'll make friends, rivals, and have all sort of fun and adventures with seven new friends.

*Takes Place in an Alternate version of the Equestria Girls setting*

*Twilight has no pet dog named Spike*

*Rainbooms don't have magical powers*

*No rogue Equestrian Magic or banished magical beings*

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 153 )

The story is really good. Keep up the good work,

I'm so sure about that look for Spike, I think it would drive the cute and sweetness of his character, if he was shorter and a bit thiner. As for introduction chapters go you did pretty fine.

Pretty good chapter Wildcard. Though, I am curious what brought this little story on.

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Felt like mixing the regular Equestria Girls series with a personal touch of my own in Spike's favor of course

“Being new as a whole is nothing to be ashamed of, Spike.” Sunset said.

When did he give an indication he thought that was a bad thing? If anything Fluttershy did and that also came out of left field.

“Oh, no. I just happen to be good at reading an animal's feelings.” Fluttershy admitted.

Since this is a no magic au I find this too much of a stretch. If doesn't feel like you are just toeing that line but jumping 50ft over it. If it was Pinkie doing her typical logic defying gags I would let it slide but not anyone else.

Interesting, very interesting... I like it so far.

I really like the idea of ​​this fanfic, similar to The Girls of My Life, but I hope it can have its differences.

I mean, in this version you could make Spike closer to the CMCs by being the same age.

“Well, I like comics, tabletop games, video games, trading cards, anime, manga...”

Wow, just reading that, I already liked this version of Spike.

You could make chapters dedicated just to that, maybe a whole one of Spike playing some TCG or in an E-Sports competition or maybe winning a cosplay contest.

In the description you said that Spike would have rivals, the first that come to mind are Rumble and Button Mash, maybe he meets Button in a video game tournament and from there a friendly rivalry arises.

Anyway, i really wish you good luck with your story.

This bring me memories of The Girls of My live and Ladies Man on a Campus... nice work Wildcard as always, I will be looking forwards for your novels hahaha, have a nice day <3

Great. Now I'm imagining Spike with the voice of Michael J. Fox.

So will there be any sexual or bikini scenes like in the stories similar to this one?

Following this immediately. Hoping that Starlight and Trixie also join the group soon

Great start, Wild. Can't wait to see more.

"*Rainbooms don't have magical powers*

*No rogue Equestrian Magic or banished magical beings*"

Or in other words. Boring?

I like the story so far. Keep up the good work, man!

Hey Wildcard, think you can add my OC Leo who is a boy born with the abilities of the power-mints from the Plants.vs Zombies 2 game into your story ?

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Possible love rivals such as Timber Spruce, Flash Sentry, Cheese Sandwich, Sandalwood, Thunderlane, Zephyr Breeze, and Caramel

Nice new scenario story with human Spike, can’t wait for more.

You always had a good taste about OCs in your storys.
But, Freshman Blues is not my favourite of your storys, but dont get me wrong, it was a good story, but Spike was OP in that, with the parkour and dance skills, i prefer this version of Spike and the one of The Girls of My Life.

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Freshman Blues was my first story, so I had to change and evolve with my stories since then

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Wow, well i can confirm your writing skills evolved with all of your great storys.

This was very nice.

That Rainbow, always a sneak.

Nice chapter man, your stories always reminds me a SoL anime style of an harem. Even when I prefer stories a little more dark like Feral World, I can resist when a Girls of My Life style story update hahaha, keep it up and have a nice day <3

Awesome chapter and good get together Spike had.

“Still, we shouldn't stereotype him like that.” Twilight warned her.

even though Rarity just did?

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

When they reached Spike's place, the stopped in their tracks and looked on with blushes on their faces. There they saw Spike using a sudsy wet sponge to wash his father's car, while enjoying the music he had playing on a radio set up close by. What had the girls all flustered was seeing Spike was washing the car wearing only sneakers and purple shorts, and wasn't wearing a shirt.

Now that’s what I call “bait-and-switch.”

😆

Well played, Wild.

“Come on, let's go!” Sunset called, as the group raced off for town eager to see what they could find.

I wonder what happens next?

Well, this should be interesting with a Human Spike which is better than having a dog version of him.

Also, I know GeorgeGarza01 for his Sparity art!

Nice job, and I think Spike would go red when he sees the girls in their swimwear.

Please redo but with spike wearing a speedo and the gals wearing skimpy swimwear, AJ a thongkini, Rarity a sling one etc

I've said it once and I'll say it again, this is my favorite version of Spike that you've ever written.

That was a fun time for Spike, especially the ending of the chapter! Keep going with this story!

Meanwhile, as each of the girls headed for their own homes, each of them were blushing from what they each did. Especially Twilight. Still they all had no regrets over what they did and smiled to themselves. Things were definitely gonna be different now.

And so it begins.

Very good. Very, very g-
*Sees the first two compliments have 4 dislikes.*
Well, you can't please everybody.

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Yeah, but when haters gang up on you and leave that many all at once they insult my story and the positive comments of my supporters. Guess it's easy to randomly downvote positive comments from others

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At least the dislike buttons are visible. *Cough*YouTube*Cough.*

Nice chapter mate, I like how you introduce yourself in the story, the group looks cute and I'm inpatient to see who will be the first who kiss him in the well manner, hope you continue this story soon. Have a nice day <3

“Let's check it out, can we? Can we? We've been walking all day and I'm exhausted!” Spike said laughing excitedly, as he ran like crazy to the store.

Is Spike wearing an orange mask with one hole for the eye?

Spike Had one fun day from going to a awesome card shop and getting kissed by all those lovely ladies, God I wish that happened to me whenever I go to the mall. :rainbowlaugh:

Bold move, Coach Spitfire.

Great quality as always, Wild!

Well that was something with Coach Spitfire.

Now Spike will be joining a band!

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