Im a brony & spike is best
This story is a sequel to Her Number 1 Husband
Spike and Twilight been best friends since kindergarten and always been there for each other, but when the boy spends the night at her place thing's become akward and start thinking if they should be more then best friends.
Spike x Twilight one shot
In this story Spike is not a dog and not part of the Sparkle family and also Shining and Cadence aren't married yet
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From her first kiss/makeout to first time in the bed with Spike & finally, a successful blackmail on Shining, this has been a phenomenal 24 hours for Twilight!
Kinda a shame, that this is one-shot, I could see this being continued as full series, I would have loved to see the rest of the Human 7 reacts. Btw, Spike M, did ya see the Gameplay trailer of MK11?
Good Story I like it
No, just no. Ludicrously rushed, and the whole Discord thing? Added absolutely nothing to the story.
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Reemember, this is from the same guy who wrote that trainwreck called The Teenage Life of Spike.
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Point taken.
I would love to see Spike and Gabby in a interesting situation.
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Which, 'by dint of huge type and monstrous margin, stretches out a 30 chapter story into a volume of 100 chapters'.
The amount of repetition (and the sheer number of times the characters do the business) is ridiculous!
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Agreed. Ugh, that fic was ghastly.
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I did, real bloody and nasty..btw I'm debating on maybe I should turn the story of Spike being part of the Apple family a full series and maybe doing a prequel on how the house fire started, or doing one on how he found the burnt photo
Where the heck did Rarity come from? Also, you should have put commas between the names
It should have been 'eight 17-year olds'
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Love the idea! That series could use more emotional drama, plus I love to know what exactly happened on that fateful as well as a follow-up story after the last one.
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I'm toying with attempting to review it.
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I fear this fellow cannot write. See this dumpster fire for more:
- Equestria Girls
- Romance
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
Spike fell into a deep depression after his girlfriend broke up with him. He moves away with his uncle 3 years later he reunites with his family and old friends but falls in love with a old friend and deals with a psycho ex trying to flirt with him.9418766
I pity you. Mind you, it can be summed up in just a few short words. This shit happens over and over again, the pacing's like a tortoise and every woman is weak and defenseless awaiting their knight in shining armor to save them.
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And the random sex. Why do they fuck each other so much?
I pointed out in a comment that AB et al are underage, making the sex scenes not only illegal, but breaking the rules of this site!
But I did get a laugh out of the line where he talks about 'finding rubbers'.
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Same. So much narm...
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In the UK (where I'm from), a rubber is this;
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Ah, the love of the language barrier. One might say, the author really 'cocked up' on this story.
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Indeed, it fell a bit flat.
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Hey I love that story! It was one of the first masterpieces I read, when I came to this site.
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I can only assume you are being ironic. Being long doesn't make it good (see Les Mis).
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I hate that movie
Well, at least Shining won’t go all Broly mode on Spike.
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Good.
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But can he do the huly puly, like Lucia?
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That...I have no idea.
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Oh, playing Bohemian Rhapsody backwards produced some fascinating results.
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It be funny if he did!
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So if this story had more chapters, it would be better do to Twilight and Spike slowly falling for each other and their friends reacting to it?
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Might be a start, yes.
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I did mention that in my review, but maybe you should save that idea as a sequel, Spike M.
This story is so shallow, i can taste the dirt -.-
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no it's so shallow that you could stand in a puddle of it and not get your feet wet.
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Hmm. I did get a laugh out of the Project X reference, I'll admit.
A sequel to this story would be great.
Might I suggest, that in it would have graduation day and also Spike and Twilight becoming parents.
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I already have one planed out, where they're are adults & Spike proposes after a date and Twilight being nervous when they start talking about having children