This story is a sequel to Your My Family No Matter What
Spike and Sweetie Belle been a couple for two years and all they do is kiss cuddle and sleep in the same bed whenever they sleep over at each other's house's, one day they decide that it was time to take their relationship a step further.
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This needs commas. Cudos for writing about EG though, they don't get anywhere near enough attention.
How do you misspell a word that has less letters than your hand has fingers? In the summary, of all places too.
Everyone is soo seductive.
Dude, this wa good, but you really need to work on the orthography and grammar, or maybe you need to double-check the last paragraph you just wrote to ensure that you did everything right, and if the problem is your keyboard, maybe you should get a new one...
Anyway, this was good nonetheless, stay cool!
Oh boy, no matter what universe, you're in Spike, you keep forgetting to hide in the evidence
How would you feel if Spike decides to become a nudist?
So I'm going to take a guess before reading this.
Spike and Sweetie had sex, and someone walks in.
I honestly would've like this story a bit better had you left out the last bit of Spike getting caught in the end. I mean, you've been inserting this whole formula of Spike getting caught doing something naughty and being punished in a whole bunch of previous fics you've written, and it's getting a little old.
Please make a sequel, maybe where where their chewing him out and sweetie walk in.