One day, when Sunset Shimmer is driving home from work, she crashes. Her car gets shattered, the other drivers are pissed, and it seems she has... memory loss? What does this mean for her future? Better yet, what does this mean for Twilight?
"Wait, I'm sorry, are you saying I'm in love with you?"
Can Sunset's memory return to her before her lover loses hope? What else has she forgotten? Will her life ever be the same again?
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Note: Sex tag is for a small bit of intimacy, but nothing really happens.
~AU Series, No Magic, No Equestria, Only Humans!~
~Thanks to Zara Larsson, and her song Never Forget You, for inspiring me!~
ALSO, if you want a sequel, just ask. It's up to you all honestly. I'll write with any free will. <3
Featured 3/27/19 !! <3
I love this story already!
This chapter is a great start, and I look forward to reading more.
Hmm, could use a bit of editing, but I'm interested to see where you go with this.
I have a feeling I know what Sunset wanted to talk to Velvet and Night Light about...
I’m a bit confused; is this connected to your other stories? Whatever, the story’s pretty good, though I agree that you need an editor. As for the intimate scene, I can see where it could be improved, but I think it conveys the emotions that you want it to. And that’s the important thing.
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Thank you. I try my best to make the stories worthy of reading. I triple check and usually I end up fixing certain things and making sure my grammar seems right. However since I don't have an editor at the moment and have no idea how to get one, I'll try to make them better :)
Also no, this story is not connected to my others. You can check out My Story Timeline for more information.
The crash feels a bit rushed but other then that, great first chapter.
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Thank you! Although I'm confused, a car crash in real life lasts only about ten seconds.
So... Does this mean that all the characters have normal skin tones?
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lol no. They all look exactly the same; colors included. Hair, skin, outfits, eyes, body, etc
Woohoo another chapter!This was adorable!
Theres a movie with chad tatum thats basically this premise. "The vow" man... I could not keep watching it, could not keep seeing what used to be a wonderful relationship disappear the way it did. Im so glad to find that premise with a much happier set of events and with 2 of my favorite characters
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Yeah, but they feel like an eternity. Especially if you lose consciousness...
NOOOO TWILIGHT!!!
If those burglars hurt twilight they will feel my wrath!!
NO NOT SUNSET EITHER!!
SHE BETTER REMEMBER TWILIGHT, OR I WILL FIGHT!!
This is sincerely heart warming. But, maybe add a little bit more commas into the mix...?
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Telekinesis?
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Maybe...maybe not....who knows?
Poor Twily. This is too much time in the hospital as a visitor.
DAAAAAMN THAT GOT ME GOOD!!
Your a genius
<Five minutes later>
Okay, I'm better. Any chance for a sequel?
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So glad you enjoyed it!! Also, maybe c;
That ending is message is so beautiful! Is like I'm reading a really awesome story
You made me go through a rollercoaster of emotions in this story!
Is there a chance that there's gonna be a sequel?
I'm so sad it's over but it was amazing!
Definitely a very cute ending.
Please, keep writing and I will keep reading.
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You know, I feel like people should not comment on a story with punctuation corrections and just get the sense to send a message to the author instead.
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Sorry about that.
I’ll delete it later.
I dunno how you've hooked me into wanting to read this story just on premise alone, but I'll just have to get to it dammit. Maybe after I write a little more; keep it up!
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Thank you xx
the burglar stuff honestly feels contrived and forced to create more drama
over all a good story but the ending felt rushed and the memory coming back felt a bit to easy but still over all i enjoyed it
Well I'll be! The content made me feel so good!
And the quotes at the beginning just seemed so cool! And Deep!
This sure was great I'd rate this a 9 out of 10 it's really good 👍
jog some memory
This was a good story but one thing seems to be missing........ where's the proposal I was expecting in the last chapter when she got her memories back?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. TWILIGHT!!!!!!!
What if she gets her memory back. Yaaaaaaaaaaaahooooooo. I may be right
It's fantastic after 1 year of re searching it again I've finally found it
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Aw! Thanks! <3
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As someone who has been in a car crash, that is about how they go. I could tell you my experience, and it would be pretty similar to how the author described Sunset's crash.
A good way to write a fight scene is to just have the characters shut up and brawl, at most some curse words. You're not going to be spouting your ideological beliefs when you're trying to punch the snot out of someone else. Commanders and bystanders should be the only ones really talking.
I can't wait for the planned sequel 🥳🥰 Ilove it