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Letting my imagination run free!


Hearts and Hooves... Oops, Valentines day is a day away and Applejack has plans for hers and Rarity's first Valentines day together. Hopefully the weather doesn't put a damper on the fields or Rarity's health.

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Thank you for the feedback! :rainbowkiss:
I truly appreciate it and no this is not a rude comment. I have read rude comments on my stories before and this is not one. :twilightsmile:
I did rush certain parts of the story to meet the Valentines Day deadline... didn't turn out that way, but I tried. :ajsmug:
Rarity being loopy one minute and the next better was one of the parts I rushed. I know I shouldn't do that, but I wanted to finish it in time. :pinkiesad2:
I knew the '4' would come back and haunt me. Sorry about that, I know that rule but I was in a hurry.
I promise I shall not publish until I reread my story at least five times! :scootangel:

I would love an editor! If you would like to be my editor direct message me and we'll talk about it. If not that's perfectly fine! :pinkiehappy:
Thank you again for your comment! :twilightsheepish:

It was, uh... It could've been better. The premise is good, but the execution not so much. You have some tense and even person mixups in there.

I'm a sucker for RariJack, though, so feel free to put it up on gDocs and shoot me a link through a PM. I'll take a look at it.

There are some parts in here that may need some work, but overall, the story is very nice.

Fantastic story!! I'd love to read more

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