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In a Crackfic Human AU that has absolutely nothing to do with Equestria Girls, Spike spends his first day of school bumping into girls.

Often literally.

Larger version of title card here.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Well it's certainly an idea.

If this is gonna take off, you should add more girls.

-FIN-

*eyes "complete" tag*

Errr...what? :rainbowhuh:

Not to pressure or anything, but maybe a "to be continued" or something would be in order? You seem to have started a plot line, and then said "the end" right in the middle of it.

*Blink*

Well that was...abrupt? Yeah, let's go with that.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the story. But then it just...ends. Like, just stops. Why? Did you just run out of ideas, did you not want to risk ruining a good story by making it too long? Eh, well, it was still good enough to get a thumbs-up and a fave from me, but honestly I'm disappointed that you're seemingly done with this.

You must make more i want to read it on my youtub channel

Comment posted by Lord Weesus Christ deleted Apr 23rd, 2016

7152429 Go ahead. As long as you leave credit in.

But if i do read it i need more chapter yoh cant let your reader haging

Chow is spelled Ciao. Dumb I know but that's the way it is.

you going to make more?

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