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Well, I'll be here for a while. Which means, I got ideas for MLP stories! XD


Join Spike as he settles in the city of Manehattan and goes through daily life decisions, all the while growing closer to his adoptive sister Twilight and getting to know the Mane Six through situations! Romance and silly hijinks abound! AU Humanized.

EDIT : Hey everyone! I decided to put this on hiatus for now. I'm thinking of revising the story, as I feel like this story could be a little better. Don't worry though, it'll still be about Spike and the interactions of the Mane 6! I'll also post out new content sometime in the future, so be hyped! :D

Either way though, I promise you all that I will make this a great read! :)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 101 )

Woaaa your doing good. 8/10

I'm expecting great things from this....keep it up

Awesome. I'm definitely keeping track of this.

Wow this story is really nice! You have my undivided attention! :raritystarry:

Oh if your going to talk about the main 6 cup sizes, don't forget the butts....If you want. Maybe big, toned etc. :twilightblush:

When is the next chapter coming out?

Well, this one's going in my library.

:rainbowdetermined2::ajsmug:Is the next chapter coming out soon? I hope so because I want Spike to meet the rest of the Main Six already!?!? :heart::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::yay::raritystarry::moustache:

Okay, first up, DID NOT KNOW I GOT THESE COMMENTS and all these other cool group features! Wow! Shows how much I'm new. XD

Also, confession time, but I was writing my other stories on FF.Net. BUT DON'T WORRY! I haven't forgotten about this! I may look like I'm away for such a long while, but I think about my stories! Seriously, I am SO SORRY though! I didn't know this story was so popular! I might need to get back to writing it soon!

Again, I am SUPER SORRY that I kept you all waiting for so long! In fact I'll write it right now! :)

Nice story can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter

Keep it up man I LOVE this fic don't make me cry plz:fluttershysad:

whens ur next chapter coming out?

Oh man everyone, I am SO SORRY for being absent for so long! I was just so busy focusing on my other stories on Fanfiction.Net, that I've put my story on hold! But I haven't forgotten it, so don't worry! Right now, I will get back to writing the story, so everyone just hold on a little longer. I know what to write in the next chapter, so it's all good! :)

Now...onto writing the next chapter! [determined face]

I like where this is going

Excellent work. This was an awesome chapter. Now I can't wait to see how Spike bonds with these girls as roommates. I imagine if he walks in on any of them getting changed or something and they don't mind, much he gets flustered.

Nice job describing their figures, especially Pinkie Pie and Rarity. Now I wonder how long it will be until Twilight realizes her feelings and then her jealousy consumes her. This was another great chapter.


Thanks! I'm glad I didn't disappoint! ^_^ As for Twilight's jealousy, it'll take a while before she does get jealous. ;)

By the way, I'm not done describing the ladies sexiness. ;D

Hooray! :D

Glad you liked the chapter! :)

Oh, it'll get to that kind of level of silliness. ;)

Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you're loving the story so far! ^_^

I don't know for certain(I kind of need to plan the next chapter out), but I might multitask writing the next chapter along with my other stories on FF.Net. Don't worry, this won't be put on hold no more! ;)

7258912 Nice! I can't wait for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

Very nice I'm a huge spike fan especially when it comes to his harems, hope to see him get a lot of affection and a new chapter comes out soon.

I swear this story is going to be on one of my top most BEST STORY EVER :yay:
Hope you can make more.

So when's the next chapter.

Hey everyone, just to let you all know again, I'm not dead. Sorry for the long wait for the next chapter, I've been pretty busy with life stuff, and I'm doing other stories on FF.Net(which by the way, check them out if you want! I have a link somewhere...). Don't worry, once I finish a chapter on one of my stories on FF.Net, I'll try to start the third chapter of "Lost in Manehattan" shortly. Just know that I'm NOT abandoning it! So just sit tight and wait a little longer...please? D:

WE New you wouldn't be dead ha (make sure to stop the funeral before she finds out) "yes sir" well good luck the next chapter bye:rainbowderp:

7499073 Um, I'm a guy, just to let you know. Lol! XD

But thanks for cancelling the funeral arrangements. ;D

7504356 how did you know ? Do you have some sort of spy hmmm?

Hey everyone! I've just finished chapter three! It's a little shorter then the last one, but I promise you, it's WORTH IT. ;D Right now my beta is looking it over. Hopefully I'll post it tonight! :)

Okay, change of plans; my beta reader has a test tomorrow, which means, I'll probably post it tomorrow. Sorry for the false info and the delay! D:

Hey all, sorry for the wait. To make things short without going into detail; my beta reader is going through some stuff right now. I might just post the chapter without it being beta'd, but I want to make sure from him if that's okay. Sorry for the delay. :(

Funny ending. And I love it all. I can't wait to see the other girls flirt with Spike some more. He's definitely gonna be in for it. I look forward to the next chapter.

7581588 LOL! Glad you thought it was funny! XD

7581758 Thanks so much for the compliment! :D

Oh he'll be in for it alright! Hur-hur! XD

7582702 I can hardly wait for the next chapters! :fluttercry: Please make them as soon as you can? :fluttershysad:


How did this chapter get past me?! :pinkiegasp:

Another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see who is next. Once again, another great chapter. :twilightsmile:

7622931 LOL! Don't worry about it! ;)

And thank you! ^_^

This was pretty great really....enjoyed it :ajsmug: can't wait for the next one

Dude you are awsome that's all I can say Fricking awsome I have been waiting for this like forever and reading this chapter IS MAKING ME HYPE.:yay::yay:

7626679 Thanks a bunch! :D Glad you enjoyed it! :)

7626709 Wow! Well dang, thank you! :D Man, I feel very flattered right now! I'm really glad you're loving it so far! :) I hope I'll keep getting you hyped then! ;D

Keep making more chapter I will forever be hype man XD

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