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Sugar Moon


Brony form Northern Ireland. Think that kinda says it all really. For now at least

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Peace has reigned for untold centuries, no enemy bothers the land yet unknown forces begin to stir. Big Mac a farmer from a small village and his best friend Time Turner are thrust into the middle of an adventure with shattering consequences for the world they live in. One things for certain, things will never be the same again.


Humanised fantasy story in the vein of WOT etc.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

As what these people below me say, I agree despite some capitalization issues here and :pinkiesmile:

In the vein of WoT? as in Wheel of Time? I love that genre.

This needs editing work, though. It's kind of annoying to read. PM me if you want to know more, I don't feel like writing it right now. I have things to go do. But it's not all bad, either, it just needs some work

Heh, seems alright so far although the editing might do with a little work.

You always bring that up,' Spike folded his arms crossly. '”People just wouldn't understand Spike, They think your race are monsters”, how do you know if you always try to hide who I am?' he asked furiously.

You might want to make it a little more clear Spike is quoting her, but maybe it's just me who found it a little unclear at first.

We're both using humanised pictures from the same artist as cover images for our humanised fantasy stories, although my story, Bloodlines, is DnD/Pathfinder RPG based. A fantastic artist, with great art, as we've both discovered.

Overall, seems like the story has potential and I hope you keep at it.

Soooo, when's the next chapter? :twilightsheepish:

Macintosh is going to kick some Chan'lins flank.:raritywink:

Yeah,it is not dead:pinkiehappy:

Hoove is just so ...:rainbowlaugh:
Big Mac(my favorite) is so....Maccy?:derpytongue2:
Why does a blacksmith making a sword is so bad?Is this country so pacifist?
And is Spliting new name for Shining Armor?
And is this a Twimac story?
Sorry for all this question but your story is making me excited like no other in some time and it look very promising:coolphoto:

Wheel of Time based? Loved the WoT joke about Ponella and Hippotaria, aka Emond's Field and Andor. No play on words about the Two Rivers? Perrin is Splitting, right?

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