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Colts' Night Out!

When Cadance and the Mane Six go out for the night to have fun, Spike wants to do the same with Shining Armor and Big Macintosh...that is, if he can get them to have fun!

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The Notebook

The Notebook #1 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

Enjoyable. Short , but enjoyable.

Zaid ValRoa

Zaid ValRoa #2 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

I agree, this felt a bit rushed, and lacked build up.
But damn, it got a few laughs out of me.

You could expand it into a longer story and would be excellent.

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

Best. Guy's Night. EVER!!!!!!!!

JK Yearling

JK Yearling #4 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

2863002 Hm, maybe I will...
I seem to have a problem with rushing my writing. My mind works at a hundred miles per second and I don't have a lot of patience for things like detail, which I really wish I'd get over.

ninjassin77

ninjassin77 #5 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

wait so spike... spiked their drinks...

Eden

Eden #6 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

*le read the end*

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Simple but funny story

Wiriamuzu

Wiriamuzu #7 · Jul 13th, 2013 · · ·

This is gonna look great on the Ponyville newspaper... Massive riot and officers down! I dont want to be Big Mac in the morning with that hangover but I REALLY dont want to be the cop that got knocked out by those two. Talk about painful...