• Member Since 20th Jul, 2014
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LunaAdmirer25


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2121288 just do your best. Nobody is perfect, and nothing we make ever will be. All we can do is improve, and move forward. Lookin forward to it regardless, and thank you for such an honor.

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thanks for understanding ill do better in the next chapter

2121112. I admit that my story is not perfect, and agree there is a good bit of wild structure, however there were simple ones that twisted your tongue regardless. Twas funny though, heh

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unfortunately Alot of of how some of the sentences are structured led to a bit of confusion when Reading aloud When i finish the reading i was gonna comment on that, but this weeks taco took Front stage.

2116883 only thing making me feel its not best quality is the sudden racing through a sentence and stopping to re-read it properly, however, im just honored you liked it enough to even consider a reading. Suggestion? Calm down and let yourself flow. Don't race, or run out of breathe mid sentence. Otherwise nice job.

Also, sorry for late replies. I used to have time, then i took skyrim lore to the brain.

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