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Draco45


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The descriptions are pretty nice.

Wonder if Smolder and Ocellus will be in Spike's harem too?


Why do I feel like the epidemic is a reference to all those Infection AUs that has been trending recently?

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Why do I feel like the epidemic is a reference to all those Infection AUs that has been trending recently?

It is mess up if you think about it. 😑 😒 :ajbemused:

Incorporating a real-life epidemic that killed millions onto your own fic, so you can make the ponies suffer too!!?? :facehoof:

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I don't think it's a real life epidemic here

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Just saying.

Plus, it will be weird for Spike and the girls. Since they were forced to become Dragoness out of life-threatening desperation, not by choice for love/lust for our dragon boy.

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I guess its the hardest choices can bring out something within someone.

Getting more curious on what the "deal" is.

Just a little bit of writing advice. You don’t need to put a : after every time someone speaks. Just close the quotation.

Need a beta to go through and correct grammar and sentence structure. At least 2 places you used "cock" instead of "tail".

Spike is really lucky to have 2 strong dragonesses literally fighting on him.
I bet Smolder wants to try that too if she hears about it.

Great chapter can't wait for more

I see Spike might be getting Coco too.

Wonder who else will be in his hoard?
I hope Smolder and maybe Ocellus too would be in it too.

Please continúe xd

Normally I like teasing and build-up but this really drags. Him being somewhat seduced is getting repetitive.

I can relate the pain, but it was worth the gain. Even if Zecora is an annoy character to write, she shouldn't be a problem, especially in a fight. (Damn her rhymes, I got caught up in it)

More please and I can't wait for the sex Sean's

Pretty interesting in seeing how Eris and Zecora are falling for Spike too.

Nice episode how ember goingto react...she jealous ?

The story is moving very slowly. I do hope one of them makes a move at some point.

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