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Aether Spark


I'm a highly imaginative and clever storymaker with a great imagination and desire to make great stories, I'm very dedicated to my stories and will always do my best to finish them. :)

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Does this has any "connection" to G5's setting?

Or this is literally a AU where Ponykind is actually in mortal danger!!??

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No connection to G5, I'd say the second, but it's not mortal danger per sey, it's... something else.

The next chapter will explain it.

Wonder whats gonna happen next?

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I am sorry but I do not understand. :twilightsheepish:

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I think he is referring to the age range.

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In dragon years for him to get that big he'd have to be 250 also pony to dragon tf's are accounted by measurement of stage of life.

Example: Adult pony = adult dragon

So around that age range.

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Its also a nod to Ranma 1/3, as Spike swapping forms so quickly, and also 30/30 from Bravestar, because, of, well ponies? :moustache:

Please spike x harem xd

Is best idea

Hope CMC on the harem if it Is Harem

Wonder how much magical energy it would cost for a manipulation of dragons natural transcendental dimentionality, unless thats just Spikes special ability. Ultra Greed growth and recovery?:unsuresweetie:

So...Is or not spike x harem(hope Is ir AND the CMC on the harem xd)

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Would you be mad if I said no? I already got his relationship mapped out, sorry.

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Obiusly not

AND obiusly Is rarity xd....AND hope ember


But nah you the autor you the boss

Is so difficult find a good spike x harem whit a good story on the background

AND when i FOUND 1 Baam Is die or not updated on Years

For the test this story Is interesanting

Thanks

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By the way you dont know Any good spike x harem? Histories

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I do know of a Spike harem group.

Just type harem in the group search.

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I can help, what kind of harem story is your forte?

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If can be a big harem better

But whit nor Trasgu story please

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An honest dragon, I don't read it but from what I have seen it's a big harem.

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Surprised Granny Smith isn't the size of a building.
And Winter Wishes Festival in G3 did introduce a kind of dragon who can manipulate weather.

Thats going to take a Lot of Lava pearls, as why should the one that caused all the problem only have the option to swap back to the form origional?:trixieshiftright:

Huh. Whelp if Igna's spell can't be undone, looka like discord is gonna alot more popular with that sleep zone

So this isn't the end of Ignia's scheme?
Of course to make anything MORE habitable for another creature, it has to become LESS habitable for others, Ponyville has grown in size to the buildings growing in size. I wonder how long it'll take the new dragons to realize their current environmental needs are contrary to a lot of the other creatures around.

At this point, I imagine the former ponies AND the natural born dragons are gonna be bristly around each other, both worried about losing their cultural identity. Both with the new dragons "infecting" the Dragon Lands with their Equestrian ideas, and the new dragon worried the natural born dragons are out to brainwash every"pony" all to act like them!

Also odd that Igna transformed pony kind... and still considered the new dragons "lesser" with disgust. What was the point then?

At the same time, the new dragons have DIFFERENT BIOLOGICAL NEEDS than ponies do!

Not to mention dragon sneeze trees that were harmless to ponies are now suddenly a health hazard!

And Rarity's precious jewels and costumes are basically clothes made out of FOOD.

And Philomena is suddenly surrounded on all sides by HER NATURAL PREDATORS! (I imagine dragons eating fire birds is how the immortal birdies haven't had a population explosion).

And if Ponyville is BIGGER... that means less room for other creatures... that's the natural law and law of basic physics.

And in a century, they're gonna have millions of building sized dragons punching each other out for resources and territory.

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At the same time, the new dragons have DIFFERENT BIOLOGICAL NEEDS than ponies do!

Not to mention dragon sneeze trees that were harmless to ponies are now suddenly a health hazard!

Then they will avoid it and learn about these needs.

And Rarity's precious jewels and costumes are basically clothes made out of FOOD.

Multi purpose

And Philomena is suddenly surrounded on all sides by HER NATURAL PREDATORS! (I imagine dragons eating fire birds is how the immortal birdies haven't had a population explosion).

Who were originally herbivores and wouldn't actively hunt.

And if Ponyville is BIGGER... that means less room for other creatures... that's the natural law and law of basic physics.

Do you really think Discord wouldn't think ahead and make sure nothing is damaged?...

And in a century, they're gonna have millions of building-sized dragons punching each other out for resources and territory.

Unless a cure is found by then...

I take it Ignia is going to end up facing exactly the same problem as every entity through existance that thinks the same as she does?

A simple question.

All your plans are now complete. So, now what?:trollestia:

Roll for Ignia being Dash ? :trixieshiftright:

I dread to think what Ignia would consider "true dragons" since it seems your average decent dragon is revolted at her.
And what would could have happened that Tirek, the embodiment of evil, would consider Ignia too vile to be partners with?

So Ignia now plans to commit CULTURAL genocide on Equestria to boot.
If she is planning on brainwashing ponies to be HER ideal of dragon kind, (something I doubt 99% of dragon kind would agree with), I hope we get to see inside the ponies' heads as they're brainwashed.

Also, I imagine this is almost a dream come true for the Dragon Town dragons, they don't need to live according to Dragon Land standards, and they can walk through Fillydelphia without anyone looking at them funny.

Very nice chapter.

As Twilight exited with Spike on her back

Spike isn't a baby dragon anymore, just how big is Twilight now? And you think Spike wouldn't care for being carried now.

“Hey!” Spike said.

“Spike! How’s it going?” Shining said kneeling down to see him.

Twilight was carrying Spike on her back, did he fall off and bump his head or just snagged in the hug being pressed into Twilight's spines?

I say this as a fellow writers and a fellow story teller for your self-betterment, sometimes your writing comes across as absent-minded, that you treat actions and characters like they exist in a void from one another when they're not center stage. Remember, everything in your story world connects with everything else.

Does Twilight know the villain can shape change?

So we don't get Igna's end game this chapter.

Thank you for writing this chapter. I had to read it beginning to end as soon as I saw it.

“So you and Rarity can be together if I’m understanding right? Don’t you think you may be jumping the crossbow right now?” Shining asked.

I thought this came from starting a race before the gun was fired, which couldnt occur until guns were invented.

In Knight Jousts, the trigger method was one of the fair ladies of court releasing her handkerchief to fall to the floor, which is an extremely strange name given theres neckerchiefs also. really need to look up the reason for the name. Oh, its French. Apparently origionally went over the head like one of those vending machine thin plastic rain wraps that you unfold and place before tyng it in place?:unsuresweetie:

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Darn, I didn't know that, I'll edit that. :derpyderp2:

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Sorry, now that you mention it it doesn't make sense. :twistnerd:

"“Um sorry about the fish thing, it’s a joke we dragons-” Razer tried to explain but Fluttershy walked past him."

If dragons see the fish at food, they'd be confused more than ashamed of Fluttershy's reaction. What if someone said that about a box of fries to you?

" just like how Magmus somehow pulled it off, "

So this has been done before. Interesting.

So what did Pinkie Pie's ESP show her?

Also, why did they all gather in the center of town when it would have been better to just talk things out where they were?

And how far can the effect spread with what little she has?

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