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Aether Spark


I'm a highly imaginative and clever storymaker with a great imagination and desire to make great stories, I'm very dedicated to my stories and will always do my best to finish them. :)

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Oh boy here we go again:pinkiecrazy:

I've got a few ideas:

-Pinkie trying desperately to not spill the beans to a visiting Cheese Sandwich

-Rarity meets the wedding changeling from "Slice of Life"

-RD plays a dangerous game by going as her true self on nightmare night

-Fluttershy accompanies Spike on a visit to the dragonlands

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Good ideas 🙂

Although Shy would be hesitant to go back since her parents were taken from her there. But she will go there eventually

Also I never saw slice of life

It seems every hidden gears have started moving at the same time. Will Equestria still stand after all is said and done?

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Also I never saw slice of life

The scene at the 3:25 mark explains it all:

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Ah, I see, :pinkiesmile:

So, want it to be that they do or don't know each other's identities? How do they figure it out?

This may be a later chapter.

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It could really go either way, but wouldn't it be funny if she found out one of her hivemates attended a wedding without a disguise?

Idea : Pinkie being so old and harbinger of doom she have for some reason a bright pink T34-85 batteltank

In your opinions, is Twilight right to hesitate about questioning her friends to gain more knowledge on their species? Or are you guys curious to find out more about them?

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Why not? If Twilight's research isn't harming her friends in any way, then there's nothing wrong with that.

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Alright 🙂 so do you have any ideas to continue the story?

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- Well, Twilight could have a History Study night with Pinkie, since the pink pony is so old.
- As part of the study of the Changeling race, Twilight could study their species magic with the help of Rarity.
- Spike (of course, if he knows the secret of Fluttershy) could have a little conversation with Shy about the compatibility of dragons with other species. Of course, taking notes of everything for Twilight.
- It has already been suggested below, but I would like to expand this option. those of the main six who revealed their secrets could celebrate the Nightmare Night in their true guises.
- Princess Luna might be interested in Rainbow Dash if she somehow found out about her vampirism. After all, vampires are creatures of the night.

Sorry for the wait, this story is not going to die on my watch. :twilightsheepish:

It appears that the Apple family is an occult organization performing rituals to improve their crops.

Strange that nopony was at home beside Applejack. At the very least, I am pretty certain Granny rarely leave the house herself.

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I don't know. I'm thinking that AJ is a were-timber-wolf. And the books are from her research into trying to cure herself.

Just how dark will this story get? Is this story going to make most of the cast jerks like the Blooming Moon story series did?

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Pretty dark in some areas but don't worry I don't intend to go full on grim dark.

“I understand but… witchcraft is a high offense in-”

Comes to think about it, why she talked as if witchcraft differ from magic anyway? I mean, in my perspective, what unicorns normally do in their everyday life are practically witchcraft to me. Plus, I don't think Celestia is that much of an idiot not to know one of the oldest family line have been doing something 'illegal' for generations under her very nose. Heck, what's the point of having S.M.I.L.E. if they cannot uncover this sort of things.

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If you recall she mentioned that witchcraft lies more in darker forbidden things.

As shown by this line.

Witchcraft in Equestria sounds silly considering everypony uses a form of magic. But witchcraft is different, voodoo, curses, necromancy, and dark magic, their all forms of witchcraft.

And that’s considered highly illegal in Equestria

applejack HAS to be a lich or a Diablo style necromancer

Pinkie's invading the story! Halp! :raritydespair::pinkiecrazy:


XD jk, I hope you all enjoyed this short but great-resolution chapter. :raritystarry:

“Because she had me hypnotize her to forget what she saw,” Rainbow said.

So... vamponies is like an Equestria's MIB?

Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted Apr 16th, 2023

Alternate universe versions of my sister are very interesting.

New chapters coming soon, sorry bout the wait. :twilightblush:

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You should check my DD story, your in it Pinkamena :raritywink:

I could take that colt in a fight easy. Injuring a dragon is nothing compared to what the GrimDark holds.

Nice chapter.

Is applejack summoning the apocalypse early and people in the upper echelon’s are getting mad? Because anyone who fucks up scheduling deserves to die.


(That last remark was a joke.)

If the cure is sunlight and vitamin C, then how will Rainbow, a creature deathly allergic the sunlight, going to recover?

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Lots of orange juice XD

This version of my sister was the steed for that thing? Disgusting.

So Celestia is totally in the dark about any of the Main Six's situations. This is going to cause problem in the future for sure.

Twilight thanked Pinkie and then she headed out to do the rest of her delayed morning chores with a near-silent mutter of “I have no idea how she used to be a harbinger of doom…”

IDK, 5 minutes conversation with Pinkie & *I* would feel doomed. 10 minutes & Death itself would be a blessed relief.

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I don't think spike is being selfish.

One they didn't seem to be all that bothered about his feelings until they were caught.

Two they had him as a primary source not like skimming a little off everyone like how did it work before spike and twilight came to ponyville.

Three he's willing to compromise he's asking about other sources and isn't outright rejecting the idea he just doesn't want to be used like just a battery.

Four its feelings they feed on something like love especially romantic love isn't something you can force.

Five Rairity's reason makes some of her other actions seem worse as she doesn't just use spike for his love but also for his help digging for gems,

assisting her generally when she's working and can be easily coerced into helping her whenever else.

While spike would have done a least some hell maybe all of it for a friend.

There is a point where you're taking advantage a lesson she should have learned at least after the manehatten episode if not way before.

Six I can understand them being scarred but accusing spike of being selfish thinking of smaking him upside the head really sweetie.

Seven what is the short/long turn affects of "love draining" is it dangerous is it not do they even know themselves?

Maybe im being at bit harsh but even in the series she was using him.

One of the worst feelings is of being used by someone you thought was a friend add romantic feelings and thats even worse.

Sorry for the long post its a great story.

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You make great points, thanks for the feed back 😊😊😊

“We may be in the wrong castle,”

:trollestia: Thank you Twilight, but your princesses are in another castle!

Does anyone want to review my most recent chapter and give their two bits on it? I cannot post until it's been reviewed.

If so please P.M me.

Was Applejack about to challenge Discord to a duel?

“ALRIGHT DISCORD, IT’S TIME TA…. Trixie?!” Applejack exclaimed when she saw Trixie in the shower.

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Seems like it, we all know AJ can be reckless at times. :ajsmug:

Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted Jun 21st, 2023

So Rarity is going to have a date with a child so she can continue feeding of him. That's way worse then stringing him along. Well great. Just great. I get that she needs to survive but this is worse then before. Kindoff. Maybe. It's all bad.

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Spike suggested the date, Rarity is doing this to revive their friendship.

Don't worry, I got plans for this. :raritywink:

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Spike is a literal child. Yes it was his idea but he gets more of a pass for it being a stupid selfish because of his age. Rarity on the other hand is an adult and has manipulated and continues to manipulate that child.

I'm excited to see your plans and I am sympathetic to Rarity and Sweetie. They are in an impossible position. Like your story points out. It's not a good situation for anyone or has an easy solution.

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