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YES! You have no idea how happy that makes me!
I never drink coffee.
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As a matter of fact, neither do I. I just go off of what I hear about people who drink coffee but can't find it at the moment. =)
Yes, book six! I’m so ready!
Loved this!!! Shining Armor and Twilight’s relationship in this is the best, haha!
Oof. As uncomfortable as it made me, you did a great job with this chapter ;P
Eeeeee, I am obsessed with this series!
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Book Seven. =P
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I admit I was uncomfortable writing this at first, but then I just went with it. =)
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Oh yeah. I'm smart
One thing: If you're going to have characters react in awe to something they're looking at, describe it to the audience.
Otherwise, this was very cute.
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Thanks. I'll keep that advice in mind for future chapters/stories. =)
Edit: I'll edit it tomorrow. It's pretty late right now.
oof
You've said that twice, btw
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Meep? =3
Ahhhhh can't wait for it!! >3<
Why don't you ask Midnight Succubus?
my favorite moment of this chapter
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I cracked up writing this chapter. I'm glad I'm making others smile! ^_^
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Thanks for the heads up!
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Ooh, I like!
No Coffee Twili is best Twili. Need more of No Coffee Twili. Wait... maybe not... that might result in my death. All of the coffee for Twili. Isn't that right dear?
Princess Twilight: Huh, what? Oh, yes. Coffee. Or you die.
See. Please send coffee.
This coming from someone who actually once asked his girlfriend to masturbate in front of him in order for him to better write a female masturbation scene, this was quite well done. I'm not sure if you had a model or not, but it was very well executed.
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Thanks. =) I used words and phrases commonly used in f/f sex scenes in fanfics from here.
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I concur
Agreed
That must have been a surprise
I love a good running gag.
Okay, that's normal
Oh...oh wow that's brave
Holy Shasta!
This was an...enjoyable chapter for sure
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Same.
Pushing the buttons on rainbows controller sounds like it would be vaguely uncomfortable.
Always the quiet ones.
Love the Hercules reference. Also nice to see someone else who likes cicadas background noise. In my experience you either adapt quickly to that or are slowly driven to madness.
You wrote the part about checking and responding texts both before and after Lemon.
“Little did he know that this simple, seemingly innocuous act would result in his imminent death.”
When my brother wakes up, getting between him and the coffee maker is a BAD idea, if one values their continued existance.
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XD I can imagine.
Death before dishonor. NOTHING before coffee!
What you did here? Trixie sees it...
What did Twilight notice? All she said was "cool," seems like a perfectly normal thing for her to say.
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All I'm going to say is that in retrospect, that line was far too subtle.
Yeah. I had Direct TV for a while, and I too often found myself with that emotion.
Okay, that one's a little too on the nose.
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I cracked up reading it!! DEFINITELY me in the morning most days. Nothing beats coffee and a cig first thing in the morning for me :)
My Uncle is like this when he does not have coffee but he just gets grouchy not crazy like Twilight was