Rarity asks Applejack about her yearbook photo. Applejack isn’t sure that’s what this is about.
My entry in the Spring Fling Contest!
Cover art by me.
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It’s been a hot minute since I read a story short and sweet, but this was a good read. 👍 Thanks for this.
I wuv that art.
Just wanted to say that
This story was short, sweet, and to the point. Oh, poor Rarity had to try pretty hard to get AJ to see what was really going on. But when she did... oh that was such a lovely climax!
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I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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Thanks! I've been experimenting a little, and I like this kind of simplicity.
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Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words
I will always enjoy a delicious glass of well made Apple and Mangostein punch. Kudos.
This was really cute!
Haven't read a story this genuinely sweet in a longer while. Loved it ❤️
This was a fun read, and I quite like how you wrote Applejack.
The above quote is my favourite line from this.
Short and fluffy.
Would have liked to see more dramatic tension, but for the length it's hard to complain.
Thanks for choosing to publish your first story for this contest! RariJack is always adorable, and you do a good job capturing that with this nice bit of fluff. It’s a little too short, and there’s a few lines that feel a little off in their voices -- but there’s many others that work excellently, and overall I liked the way things played out. Thank you for the submission.
Fun lil story.