Good Enough

Starlight debates through a series of moments if she's good enough for Trixie.

An In-Direct Sequel to Bag of Tricks
Knowledge of the prequel is not required to enjoy this story, but recommended for full enjoyment.

Pre-Readers- Sleepless Beholder, Apple,
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Editor: LysandorsD

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Jade Dawn

Jade Dawn #1 · Jan 4th, 2022 · 1 · ·

“7:15 AM.” Starlight yawned as she pushed herself into an upright position, a pillow attempting to cling to her disheveled mane. Blinking as she rubbed the dust from her eyes, she read the clock again in disbelief. “7:45 AM.”

...why does this feel so relatable? xD

Dewdrops on the Grass

Dewdrops on the Grass #2 · Jan 4th, 2022 · 2 · ·

“7:15 AM.” Starlight yawned as she pushed herself into an upright position, a pillow attempting to cling to her disheveled mane. Blinking as she rubbed the dust from her eyes, she read the clock again in disbelief. “7:45 AM.”

Oh look it's me.

"So, you want to buy her cupcakes made by somepony else? That doesn't seem very romantic or creative to me. I thought you wanted this to be special," Spike said, staring at her with one eyebrow raised.

Wow Spike, way to guilt someone. Jeez.

“Starlight, relax. It’s just cupcakes, you don’t have to be this serious about it,” Spike interrupted, putting a claw on her shoulder. As soon as Starlight turned to look at him, he saw the pain in those violet hues.
“How can you say that, Spike? Trixie’s happiness is a very serious thing. These cupcakes have to be the best thing she’s ever eaten! If they’re not… “ Starlight began, but hesitated. If it’s not good enough, will she still love me?

Lord... that anxiety. That worry. That feeling of worthlessness, like a single mistake will lose you your love forever... I think a lot of us know that feel. I know I do.

You weren’t good enough for Sunburst as a friend, what makes you think you’re worthy of Trixie’s love?
It was like a sickness, but this one had no cure. At least, no magical solution would make it go away. She had tried more than a few times, with no real results other than an angry Twilight.

Sorry Starlight, but you can't mind magic this away. At least, not without destroying who you are. Gotta do therapy instead. Celestia knows you could use it.

“Starlight… Am I good enough?” Trixie asked, even though she knew she was alone.

And there's the kicker. The other person (in a two-person relationship) feeling just as insecure and worried... a very common feeling indeed. This is why talking things out matters, and why it's better to admit feelings even if they may feel like they hurt.

Trixie sighed as she looked at the dandelion she held within her hooves. If she was going to make a wish, she’d wish for Starlight’s love. That was all she really wanted, all she needed. “Please… Starlight I love you.”

Oh no it's me.

“I love them,” Trixie explained to Starlight, and then jabbed her with her free hoof. “Trixie can’t help but tease every now and then. That’s what you gets for making Trixie wait.”

Trixie why you gotta be such a cliche yo.

Anygay this was really quite sweet. A short tale of anxiety on both their parts, and worries shown to be mostly silly. I've seen circumstances like this go many ways though... a poor choice of words coming up that hill could easily cause a lot of problems. And yet Starlight was honest, which was the right thing to do.

Is a good Nailah story, for sure.

Eddy13

Eddy13 #3 · Jan 4th, 2022 · · ·

Hey, shouldn't there be a 'Romance' tag?

Nailah

Nailah #4 · Jan 4th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Romance isn't even the focus of this story, so I felt that tag wasn't needed here. But keep on the lookout because I'm planning to continue this at some point, and that'll be a romance.

Silver Mint

Silver Mint #5 · Jan 4th, 2022 · 2 · ·

This was a treat to read. I think it's a piece many people can connect with on either side (Starlight and Trixie's),

SigmasonicX

SigmasonicX #6 · Mar 1st, 2022 · 2 · ·

That was a sweet look at Starlight and Trixie's romance. It's interesting to see them presented with mutual anxiety, and it's nice to see them overcome it.

Shady Nail