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PixiePony


She/They. Avid fanfic reader. Write stories more often then I publish them :twilightsheepish: Sunlight * Flutterdash * Rarijack :heart: I do pony reacts on YT! Falling-Pixie Creations

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The romantic dreams Rarity had been plagued with were now starting to become clear. She desperately wanted to know who they were about and it seemed her subconscious was finally ready to give her an answer.

BIG thanks to my Bata Reader TecnoSmurf and for keeping me inspired to finish it!
This is a 4 chapter story and will be updated every week!

Teen Rating for sexually implied situations
EG Universe Story only; Sunset shows up but the others girls show up briefly; They are all around 18, seniors in HS;

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 27 )

I love this story so far! I'm really curious how (or if) Rarity will admit to the feelings she has. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Definitely good so far and lining l looking forward to more.
BTW, does this mean I now need to write a rarijack story about Applejack dreaming about Rarity:rainbowlaugh:

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Thanks! It's gonna get really good :heart: And yeah haha another similar story with another pov :pinkiehappy:

Great first chapter. The dream sequence is awesome. ^^

I was a little disappointed at first that Applejack didn't go for bridal style, but I should have figured Rarity would take nothing else. Also I'm pretty sure everyone knows now, psychic dream reading powers not needed.

Comment posted by PixiePony deleted Jul 24th, 2021

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😂 They do come off a bit obvious, though Rarity has always been a flirty girl. Over the shoulder scene was one of the first I wrote, it was such a funny idea to me :ajsmug:

I laughed out loud the first time I read AJ placing her over her shoulder. I didn't expect that at all and I was also thinking she would get her on her hands. Very nice and funny. ^^

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It's so perfect! Rarity being impressed by her strength but flustered by the way she displays it :raritystarry:

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I agree. Perfect situation. And as usual, what I admire about your stories. Rarity says "No" and wants her to put her down. And she does. No questions asked. Even if she is laughing while saying no. A lot of people would argue she didn't mean and and carry on. But I love, that your stories emphasise the "No"-part of a situation (Small exception: One could argue, that her bashing at her back with fists and shoes could be a nonverbal no. It is common in a lot of media types, to play this off for the lulz. Socialisation is so strong sometimes, that you can't get around it. O_O)

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And it's funny because, as you know, it's something so important to me but I don't usually purposefully put it in my stories. I write it in naturally, because it just makes sense. And yeah, her really putting up a fuss is her trying to convey how much she dislikes it. But AJ knows her and knows when Rarity is really upset. Even if she's laughing a bit she still would like to be put down. The moment is funny but not if it lasted longer than it had.

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Exactly. As I said, wonderfully written, neither I nor Rarity seemed to have anticipated that and she got put down, when she wanted to. ^^

I like this chapter the most! Sensual. Romantic. And AAAAH! People not talking with each other. The most common thing for relationships not to happen. xD

Love it.

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Miscommunication can be really fun if it's done right! :raritywink:

yeah i can totally see AJ picking Rarity up like that

great story, i do love Rarijack, and the pacing was perfect.
if you ever need an idea for the next pairing i'd love to read a love triangle between Octavia / Vinyl and Lemon Zest. With Lemon and Vinyl ending up together

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Ooooh. That sounds like a cute idea! :D

Of course Rarity wants to be courted. Well, who could blame her. Go AJ! ^^

Lovely. And I don't think your endings are bad. You might struggle with them internally. But they are always solid! ^^

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Oh yes. Main antagonist in a lot of stories. ^^ Internal struggles. :D

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I'm glad that's the case, I don't want the ending to a nice story to be ruined.

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Nah, you are good. :)

Endings are hard, but you did just fine. I am a fan of taking all the subtly built up over the story and finally having a chance to say screw that at the end. Sunset basically tellng her to go handle her business, that totally works. A sweet story with a sweet ending, and just enough teasing throughout to keep it interesting. Well done. :ajsmug::raritywink:

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Thank you!! I'm glad you liked the ending. That's the part I struggle with the most but at least it came together in a coherent way.

She knew how to flaunt herself.

Understatement detected. :rainbowlaugh:

Love this story<3:ajsmug::raritywink:

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