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This will gradually be worked on.
God damnit spike
Discord I think you have made a lot of chaos, by doing what you just did, at least for those 7
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Else good story so far, looking forward to more.
I do wonder who will be Spike/Barb's mate?
Well, life loves to throw jokes. I would have laughed more if Dusk sent messages written to the princesses, but it turned out that there are princes in this Equestria. That would be laughter. But, that's not the case, although the twist with the female version of the Big Mac made me smile. it's sad, of course, that there are such "status hunters" as Rarity and the like (note that there are such not only among women). By the way, if Rarity is now Elusive, doesn't that mean Blueblood has become Bluebell?
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That answer is coming up soon actually.
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I hope you keep them girls, for the idea of Twilight/Dusk having to deal with Celestia and Luna hit on him, is far to good.
Ooooh interesting and interestinger, each chapter seems to add onto this new reality, even short it was very entertaining!
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Thanks
Well I for one don't think casting the spell again will fix it, for the spell was about finding love, and Twilight/Dusk without knowing it has gotten what he asked for earlier. Now we just need Moon Horse to go and take her Book horse. That is unless Sun Horse gets in the way for as Luna said.
So who knows there might be a Sister war over the first Male Alicorn, for both of them have probably been waiting for one of those to show up.
I thought so! When Luna's behavior changed, it was an absolute sign to me that she was flowing for Dusk.
if I had been alone in the room, I would have rolled on the floor laughing when I read the moment with Butterscotch fainting because of the sight of his own boner.
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I think he won't mind lying down with both sisters... if they themselves are open to such an idea.
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No disagreement there
Well this chapter give me an answer for my question. though, I still feel a little sorry for Rarity.
Rainbow Blitz appears to be a womanizer who prefers the company of pegasus mares (an asshole).
I wonder what kind of intrigues Barbara decided to weave.
Is there going to be a prequel elaborating on this?
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No prequel but there will be plenty of action at a later date.
Well the coin will probably soon drop for them, that this is not going to changes at all, for the spell did what it supposed to do. They have just not realize it yet. I feel a bit sorry for Rarity/Elusive for she has been given a harder starting point then the others. But I believe she can fix it. And it seems Twilight/Dusk might have misunderstood some of the mare's, for if they are like Derpy then they are not so bad.
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Now it would be funny if Blueblood Is still the same but now is the one that tries to court
RarityElusiveAt that moment, Elusive realises, he is trying to date a Gay Prince at that Gala night and feels remorse about it
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I agree it will be fun.
Now the fun can really start happening. For now they got no choice but to accept their new lives.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
So, shouted and that's enough, life goes on.
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Let the debauchery begin! Haha!!
the new reality will be difficult to accept only Rarity and Fluttershy. Rainbow will need to sort out her relationship with Big Mac (I don't remember her name, but you get what I mean) . The rest didn't seem to have much change.
I'm waiting for the bed scene between Dusk and Luna.
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. Though there is a chance she will not come in at all do to her not being a Character in the tags.
Well Dusk will probably tells Luna about what happen. she will probably realize she got her chance, and will start to prepare Herself for it. And time will tell if there is a player 3 in that, for we have not seen anything of Celestia yet, so we got no idea what she might be wanting
Else I think there is nothing to fear for Butterscotch, for he does seem to enjoy his new life, he just need to get use to it. Rainbow and Elusive however will be a wild cards here, for Barry seem to already be fully stable, same with Barb those two are just having a good time.
Also fully agree with you on what to look forward to.
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files.everypony.ru/smiles/8d/96/e82786.png <----This lady, quite possibly, has also not had a banana for a thousand years.
files.everypony.ru/smiles/c7/64/78d6ba.png <---- But this lady (probably) will surely play a procuress for her beloved foal.
The main thing is not to happen like this:
files.everypony.ru/smiles/09/c0/0d744e.png VS files.everypony.ru/smiles/e7/62/e10af7.png
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Well if Cadance gets into this she will 100% try and get them all 3 into the same bed. For Both Celestia and Luna has been without love for To long for. And she has probably tried to get Dusk/Twilight a lover for a long time. So she might as well get them all in one go
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Evrica! It should be an Alicorn's foursome. Then no one will be offended, and all the girls will get a piece of meat
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Well that is unless Cadance still got her Shining Armor. For I do not think she would want to go to bed with her own Brother in law.
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I have to agree. Love is love, but morality must be had.
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Right you are.
Man Elusive and Applejack are to hard on Pinkie. Sure Pinkie fuck up but that is no reason to be that way to Berry. Else Dusk took the news the best, when he is standing as one of those who is worse off, for all he knows off he can't really trust mare's now do to his title, he got no idea who cares about him and who cares about his title. Yes Elusive was dealt a bad hand but not so bad it can't be fixed. While Applejack's life is the same but now he got a big sister and has a dick, that is nothing next to what Blitz is dealing with, who just like Dusk took this really well, with everything he knows about his new life. A part of me would say that Dusk and Blitz had the worst hand dealt to them, and yet handle it the best.
Well, it's a relief to know that Blitz is a womanizer not for fun. although I do not approve of polygamy, there is no other option in this world. And the fact that Blitz is able to withstand several rounds with several mares only adds respect to him.
That's a lot of work for one guy. And it seem Blitz is going to be fine taking over that job. Else I can't help but feel that those mare's are using his loyalty to get with him. Not that he seem to mind.
Also I hope Dusk has found out that he got a cousin to pick up, for it seems his counter part had set up a auto mail system of some kind. unless it was Dusk who send it himself.
Barb took to being a girl really fast. And it seems like it will not take a long time before Luna finds out. Else got to say that Elusive really needs to take a moment and take a deep breath. For all he knows so far is rumors, and as Barry told him, he might not have done anything and was set up.
Based on this chapter alone I wonder if the male cast of the cannon characters did the exact same thing here in their alternate universe and now are female. I'd love to see a spin-off of this story with them going through the exact same events stated here and laugh at how they would handle this same situation.
Maybe when your done with this story you can re-tell it with the male mane 6 and tell us how they would deal with the same problem. Maybe expand some ideas you use here for them
Well, I think Rarity got the best ending possible. Rainbow got used to her new reality perfectly. Although I'm still wondering what happened to Red Galla at Blitz.
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We're far from over with the story
Well now that the fire from under Elusive is lessened, he can now find out what is really going on with that, for he knows little about what is really going on.
And I take it with Blitz bringing up Petunia, there is a chance of him ending up having to deal with her face to face.
Seems everyone has started to accept life again. Well not all, Dusk really need to learn when to quit.
I would say that Dusk is a idiot when it came to his little date. But only do to who she is, for she is not the type to hunt for titles. While the other girls might be hunting him do to his titles, which is not love. And we do not need to look far away to see why he needs to be careful. So I would say he needs to say sorry to her, Which she will probably accepted.
And Blitz really need to learn to accepted a no from AJ, for what he did was going to far with AJ.
Else good job to both Elusive and Berry for doing the main work.
*inb4 Luna convinces Dusk to stay a stallion with a good rutting session that makes them a couple*
Also,, TIME FOR KIRIN FOALS!
Dusk shows a stubbornness that AJ will envy. Or is he just in the strongest despair and considers the creation of a corrective spell the only hope, without even considering the options to accept the current outcome
Petunia, Petunia... you shouldn't be trying to put your hooves on the prince's friend.
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I agree.
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I think the title hunt is just an excuse. in fact, he just needed to get rid of Barb as soon as possible and continue his fruitless experiments. But he still needs to apologize to the cute Derpy.
Honestly if it was anypony else besides Derpy and Luna then yes i would say he was cautious, BUT because i know it WAS Derpy I can safely say "Yes Dusk was being entitled"
Dusk you better be a smart boy, and send that girl flying fast enough, that she beats Blitz's speed record on her way out of town.
Else really happy for Elusive and Barbra. Now Barbra just need to poke Dusk enough, to make him make a spell there can share life force between two race's.
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Well he did meet some who was after the title, so it's not something not to think about. But when it comes to Derpy he had nothing to fear, for she is far to sweet to try something like that, same would be said if it was Luna, who really needs to just come in and Drag him to bed, for I feel like Dusk will not know she cares deeply else.
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You misunderstood me. Dusk did not perceive Derpy as a "Title Hunter", but he used this aspect of his royal life as an excuse under which he could relatively get away with an imposed date and return to unsuccessful experiments. I don't think Dusk is stupid enough not to understand the consequences of his actions. But the truth is that he now prioritizes trying to put everything back in place, rather than entering into a relationship. Hence the rather aggressive reaction to the attempt to impose other priorities on him.
I agree that Luna needs to be more assertive and open in her attempts to attract Dusk, up to such obvious methods. Because this stallion, having caught fire with some idea, will not notice a fried rooster until he pecks him in the ass.
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. Yeah him thinking that Derpy would do that, makes him look a bit bad, so I do hope he gives her a heart filled apology at some point, and if she still want's to try and date him, he should give her the chance. Even though I am more for Luna, but they can probably share, for there still seen to be more girls then guys around.
Ah ok fair enough that is my bad sorry
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+1 for the herd
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Agree
I will warn that the next chapter will be darker and contain uncomfortable themes. Reader discretion advised
I am sad that I wrote that, but it's what happens in the plot, Petunia was a psycho to the end.
Firstly, I hope Blitz returns to normal after this... well, as normal as possible. Probably not going to be any more studding, I don't think.
Second, I hope Thunderstrike isn't seen as a monster for her part in all this.
Oh, thank goodness! At least there's that!
And things got so much better!