Twilight Sparkle goes up to Ponyville's hill to see a meteor shower that is planned to happen tonight. Well, until she gets a visit from an unexpected visitor.
None of the vectors and the baground used are mine!
Here's the link for the vectors and the background that I used :
https://www.desktopbackground.org/wallpaper/gallery-for-mlp-night-backgrounds-228988
https://www.deviantart.com/slb94/art/You-Silly-Filly-646973374
https://www.deviantart.com/misteraibo/art/Vector-Telescope-277904603
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I've just started reading your story and I've noticed something. You refer to Twilight as both a "he" and a "she". Which is it?
You may want to edit your description to be more grammatically correct.
It's amazing
Great story, though it could use some editing. which I would be more than happy to provide
Great story