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Teku2114


Looking for inspiration, friends, and maybe a good reason to start writing my own stories. Till then, may your creativity run wild for all to enjoy!!

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This has an interesting premise to it. Although, with the color of the words, it's a little hard to read.

So far, this is pretty good. Can't wait for more.

How is this both anthro and takes place in the Equestria Girls universe?

Let's see where it goes.
files.everypony.ru/smiles/f0/f3/d62ee4.png Please change the color of the first Chapter.

Interesting origin and a decent opening.

Some spelling and grammar issues, but it's still readable. Running it through Google docs spell check or grammarly would help.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

I’d recommend gram army to help with the grammar. It’s not perfect but it’ll help, I’d also suggest longer chapters. I’d recommend a thousand words minimum, it’ll encourage you to flesh them out more

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Will take gram army into consideration, and I am planning on making chapters longer.

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Sorry autocorrect grammaly not gram army

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What darkstar is referring to is grammarly

I wonder how the wish will make spikes life better. Should be interesting.

Thanks for the shout out and your welcome for the help. Also I hope the kids are okay! Lice can be very annoying.

Also loving the descriptions and designs for twilight and the way she behaves around him.

It would be funny if spike wished for twilight's breasts to go up a cup size lol.

Standing at a good five foot three, was a yound girl with purple eyes, with dark violet long hair that reaches down to the middle of her back, with strands of light pink highlights being in a few spaces. Adorned her hourglass figure was a light violet colored tube top, struggling to keep her generous large C-cup breasts within, squishing her generous bussom together for added effect of sexual allure as the clothing was a couple sizes too small, and allowing all who see her to notice that she was without a bra. With a matching colored pair of puffy pants, hiding her generous rear end from the world around her, and a pair of light violet colored slip on shoes.

Hmmm? Just C - Cups?

Also wish to once again, I would like to thank "Right Writer" for asking great questions, and giving me idea's for the crossover portion by creating list after list with many female character's from multiple anime's, cartoon series, movies, and game's.

Interesting. Would you mind sharing which female character you had in mind from these different media and franchises?

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1. Gilda the Griffin
2.sunset shimmer
3.queen chrysalis
4.ember
5.gabby
6.loona (helluva boss)
7.millie (helluva boss)
8.verosika mayday (helluva boss)
9.charlie(hazbin hotel)
10.vaggie(hazbin hotel)
11.carmelita fox (sly cooper game)
12.krystal (starfox game)
13.shantae(shantae half genie hero game)
14.risky boots(shantae half genie hero game)
15.jasmine(Aladdin) the animated one not the live action one.
16.desiree (danny phantom)
17.ino yamanaka (naruto)
18.hinata hyuga (naruto)
19.tsunade senju (naruto)
20.rias gremory (highschooldxd)
21.akeno himejima(highschooldxd)
22.koneko tojou (highschooldxd)
23.yasaka (higschooldxd)
24.miia (monster musume.)
25.isabelle (animal crossing)
26.renamon (digimon)
27.lola bunny (space jam 1)
28.judy hopps(zootopia)
29.queen tyranee (duck Dodgers)
30.flora (twokinds webcomic)
31.raine silverlock (twokinds webcomic)
32. Katherine Vaughan (twokinds webcomic)
33. The great and powerful trixie


1.vinyl scratch
2.spitfire
3.fleetfoot
4.derpy
5.ruby rose (rwby)
6.yang xiao long (rwby)
7.blake belladonna (rwby)
8.nora valkyrie (rwby)
9.velvet (rwby)
10.pyrha nikos (rwby)
11.v (murder drones)
12.toriel (undertale)
13.rebecca (cyberpunk edgerunners)
14.Queen beelzebub (helluvaboss)
15.octavia (helluvaboss)


1. Ashoka tano (star wars the clone wars)
2.aayla secura (star wars)
3.rouge the bat (sonic)
4.vanilla the rabbit (sonic)
5.cream the rabbit (sonic)
6.kunou (highschooldxd. She's yasaka's daughter)
7.starfire (teen titans)
8.raven (teen titans)
9.azula (avatar the last airbender)
10.ty lee (avatar the last airbender)
11.katara (avatar the last airbender)
12.toph (avatar the last airbender)
13.gardevoir (pokemon)
14. Lopunny (pokemon)


1.wendy (gravity falls)
2.harley quinn (harley quinn. The adult cartoon one.)
3.luz noceda (owl house)
4.lightning dust
5.xj-9 (my life as a teenage robot)
6.bloom (winx club)
7.musa (winx club)
8.arcee (transformers prime)
9.arachnid (transformers animated)
10. Smolder
11.gazelle (zootopia)
12.nightmare moon
13.daybreaker
14. King adelaide (twokinds webcomic)
15.flurryheart
16.ember (danny phantom)
17.kim possible (kim possible)
18.ann possible (kim possible)
19.neo(rwby)
20.emerald sustrei (rwby)
21.blackfire (teen titans)
22.Madeline adelaide (twokinds webcomic. Shes king adelaide's daughter)
23.kali belladonna (rwby. Shes Blake belladonna's mother)


There ya go. There's all the lists he gave me. Any idea's?

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Interesting list.

Any idea's?

I actually have some, but do you want me to tell it to ya here or through PM?

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PM it to me please, I'll check it in the morning.

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And what, pray tell, is wrong with C-cup-sized breasts? Going on the description of Twilight being only five-three, I'd say that her chest would be rather perfect on her. :twilightblush:

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Personally, I just seen a whole lot of harem/porn/sex stories like these that have the girls get massive titties.

The "smallest" that I seen in these stories is between D - F Cups. While G - I Cups is more "moderate". And J - Cups, K - Cups, L - Cups to further beyond is a little more frequent. :applejackunsure:

So don't fully blame on me when these kind of stories does this a lot.

This chapter was fantastic! I'm loving the creative use for sci-twi I wasn't expecting her! And now Spike has two genies to protect him in the upcoming harem battle,Cross your fingers everyone.

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Just wait, might be surprised of what happens later in chapters.

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Everyone there own.
But, I will take your words into consideration for later chapters.

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Thank you!!
Really love surprising others, and I hope you enjoy the many surprises to come!

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Anything and/or everything.
Trying to bring multiple characters from mutiple other books, games, and shows into the story.

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Just hoping everyone enjoys the story as I continue to write, and hope it gets the creativity of others to run wild as well.

Wow! I like the cover. although I have a vague feeling that it was made by a neural network.

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Ok, I'll admit it. I used a site known as Night Cafe. A ai generator site. Figured it look good as a way to keep the theme of the story.

Are you taking suggestions for other genies?

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Yes, but please send the list via P.M. please.

Well, Cynder was a surprise. I am familiar with the rest either only indirectly or not at all (black renamon and Diana Foxington).
In a few more moments I would really like to insert a meme with a bald bespectacled man who very sarcastically says "Oh, how convenient!"

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😋What can I say, I just enjoy throwing a few unseen surprises into the mix to keep others on their toes, and guessing of what will happen next.😋

wait a minute! Didn't it say in the last chapter that Cynder took over the kitchen?! Where is Ember from?
Let the jinn's battle begin! Let's see what Twilight can do against the lover of sweets.

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Thank you for catching that. Auto correct stuff.
Soon the battle of jinn's shall commence.
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But only in a surprising way!:ajsmug:

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:applejackconfused:Almost done with the next chapter, so please be patient as I place the finnishing touch's.:applejackconfused:

It wasn't Cynder... Most likely it was Chrysalis.

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Damn, for some reason I just remembered the opening backstory of Bakugan, but I do not know. how it sounds in English, so the joke goes into the trash.

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