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ElementBrigade


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Why would in the heck would they send a lone Time Guardian against BROLY of all People! she need back up with say Goku, Trunks, Vegeta and Android 16 17!

NICE!!! Looking forward to seeing the next chapter!

“Good morning Equestria! It’s Monday morning here on this fine autumn day as ever! This is Milky Way here bringing you the hottest hit songs to play over the radio waves! Here’s today’s latest song called. Everybody Hurts!”

And from this fillies and colts we learn an important life lesson. Karma is a vindictive bitch. :twilightoops:

Nice so far, there are a couple of errors.

Bought

About, or 'Bout if that's what you were going for.

And

being play,

Being played. not other hiccups that I could spot so good on you for that.

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Actually I had an Earthling Time Patroller that took on Brolly single handedly. I uh wasn't trying to make her stupidly over powered. It just happened. :twilightblush:

I thought they used Dollars in the EQG world, and Bits were Equestria.

Also, Saiyans wrap their tails around their waists, like belts, to keep them our of harms way during combat, or when trying to avoid drawing attention to themselves.

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Belle is too prideful and finds it annoying to try and hide it XP

9073248
So she's leaving herself vulnerable?
Or is she of the Saiyans' upper-class, like Nappa and Vegeta?

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... Let's hope no baddies think to grab her tail, then.

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Actually the class of Saiyan doesn't really matter so much as much as it does if she exercises her tail muscles that's the reason Nappa and Vegeta weren't affected by their tails being grabbed

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Wouldn't Raditz have known that and acted accordingly?
Goku gets a pass because he didn't even know he was a saiyan.
I don't THINK Gohan ever even had his tail grabbed, did he?

It's been WAAAY too long since I properly watched DBZ

HHHOOLLLYYY CRAP!!

ELEMENT FINALLY MADE ANOTHER FIC!!


PRAISE BE TO FAN FICTION JESUS FOR THIS IS A MIRACLE!!!


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He did know that but he didn't think that anyone would ever grab his tail he was basically undone by his own arrogance

9078354
Eh.

Again, it's been WAY too long since I last watched DBZ, other than the TFS Abridged series.

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I only really know this because every time I play a Dragon Ball Z game whenever it comes up to Raditz it always says he didn't work out his tail muscles

... it's like a R63'd version of TFS DBZA Vegeta, after he's gotten over the worst of his pride.

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The only difference is that she'll listen, while Vegeta would ignore and fly off someplace else and rages about pride and stuff XD

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I was thinking more like how he was after Perfect Cell wrecked his shit and the only one nearby TO hear him was Krillin.
That VERY brief moment of humility before Krillin started talking too much.


Also, why isn't her name vegetable-based?
Kakarot, Raditz, Bardock, Broly, Toma, Cabba, Califla, Kale, Vegeta, Tarble... Need I go on?

Friendly word of advice, give the name of Frieza's race an actual name. Trust me, it sounds much better.

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I think I have it!!!

Her name, Belle, is short for Belpepp. That way she can retain her Saiyan pride in her name being relative to some form of vegetable or fruit.

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I take it that it's been niggling at you since I brought it up, about the name?

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You mean like Vegeta, Tarble, Kakarot, Bardock, Toma, Pumbuken, Cabba, Caulifla, Kale, Broly and Raditz?

Name should NOT outright be the vegetable you're basing it off!

Belle Pepp is a more accurate Saiyan name.
And it's still close enough that Dash would mock her, only to be met with a comment on it being a Saiyan name to be proud of.

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There's also Beetz, that one Saiyan that was with Paragus during the new movie. Those count too

Great work. :3

Have seen this for a while, so seeing updates is fun. If you can keep going, I appreciate it.

I always love the Saiyan Apatite. So far this is well written and engaging. =3

“Buck your stupid human jinxes! This still proves nothing! You hear me!?”

I think i hear murphy saying "challenge accepted"

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