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nice work.
i never got around to reading the original so this is essentially new to me so i am excited to see where this goes. in the original you had goku in the picture with Dash but unless this is an extreme AU the fact the main character has his tail and can fly tells me this is not Goku. also the fact that he didn't A. try to make friends with them or B. challenge the strongest among them to a fight.
nice work.
everypony in the room starts backing away from the crazy mare punching Dash's pillow. lol
dude, you need to look over your work. it wasn't a bad chapter per se but
pretty big mistake right here.
bit of editing needed here
good start, though i noticed you have the word 'fate' when you meant 'faith' 'leap of faith'
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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Yes sorry I will be working on it soon. I'm currently working on the next chapter in my digimon story. Once that chapter is done I'll work on the next two chapter for this one. Thank you for being patient.
Nice Very nice
9706010
Try again
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Yep
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Thank you
lol...
Nice work looking forward to the next chapter for this and your digimon one
nice job can't wait for the next chapter
It looks like you changed the character name to gokten it sounds fitting for being Goku son.
Why is spitfire saying crash instead dash?
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It's her Wonderbolt nickname.
Great!
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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I'm currently working on the next chapter for my Httyd, but after that I will update this story. I'm also looking for a good editor and grammar editor
Damn fine start but DBZ + MLP = WTF
This is going to be amazing or blow up... Hopefully without Equis... The planet killer/devistating rate in DBZ dont mix well here 
Goku??? Who... ... I well... We find it out soon enougth
Damn Goku... Equis is doomed... When did he ever fight as adult a serious fight without massiv destruction
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Um his name is Goken. Not Goku X3
Goken...Neat! Hes a powerhouse but he didnt have a planet destroyed counter on him like Goku... Next chapter might wannt to explain why Rainbow Dash isnt going to need to eat for the next days. I check for edit needed parts later.
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Thanks 
I just noticed
Whos the troll disliking literally all comments
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Just some jerk
This was a awesome and funny start to this fic can't wait to see where it goes.
This was a awesomely chill chapter I'm happy they helped RD .
Damm Goken is a boss out the door.
This was a epic lore chapter.
I can see it now. The shipping of Goken with Twilight and Rainbow Dash.
Chichi: "Whaaaaat, I'm not ready to lose my little Goken yet."
You could use some edits here and there, but not a bad start.
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The first chapters unfortunately I didn't have an editor at the time.
Hope you update soon. Been a big fan of the story since chapter 1.
I look Forward to more This is entertaining